读后续写543法则课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习

高考读后续写(五四三法则) -高考总复习作文专题 目录 1.读后续写技巧 2.高考真题训练 3.优秀范文实例 读后续写技巧 五四三法则 5R解读故事 4句确定框架 3大续写原则 5R解读故事 1. Read for characters 2. Read for conflict/problems 3. Read for plot 4. Read for emotional changes 5. Read for theme 4句确定框架 Step 1:先写最后一句(主题句) Step 2:再写衔接句(第一段的最后一句) Step 3:根据所给段首语句写角色的情感 Step 4:补全续写每段的中间内容 三大续写原则 1. Action — Response原则 2. Conflict — Solution原则 3. Negative — Positive原则 三大续写原则 1. Action — Response原则: 一个角色的所言、所行、所感和所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。每段对话1-2句,不一定两个人都要说话,无声的动作也是一种response。 三大续写原则 2. Conflict — Solution原则: 一般而言第二段会有问题的solution。 (同时思考:能否在第一段出现一个问题,然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点,另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。) 三大续写原则 3. Negative — Positive原则: 写作中一定要有情感的变化,无论前面是怎样的情感,最终都应该是积极的。 高考真题训练 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2022·唐山模拟)Ajay was sitting quietly in his last annual function (典礼) of middle school. The Prize Ceremony was about to start and he was confident this time that he would get a prize. He didn't really know why he desperately wanted a prize — to hold the precious small cup, to get the applause from the audiences, or to understand the feeling of others who get the prizes. In previous years he tried very hard and participated in all the activities — academics, literature, sports and etc. — to stand on this big stage. Unfortunately he could never make it to any of 1st, 2nd or 3rd positions in any events. At last, in the final year he tried the toughest but safest bet — Target “The Student with Most Attendance”. He had to not miss any day in school to receive the precious cup in this category. He came every single day when the school was opened — be it freezing winter when people don't even want to come out of quilt or be it hot summer when burning roof of their classroom is not less than live oven. He came to class even when he fell sick. The prize “The Student with Most Attendance” was about to be announced. He was restless with anxiety and expectation though he was quite sure to win it. But fate did not favor him. It was not his name. He checked the records later to find