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Yao Lu 五四三法则—— 读后续写 2023届高考备考 Review 五四三法则 5R解读故事 4句确定框架 3大续写原则 1. Read for characters 人物 2. Read for conflict/problems 问题/冲突 3. Read for plot 情节 4. Read for emotional changes 情感变化 5. Read for theme 主题 5R解读故事 Step 1：先写最后一句（主题句） Step 2：再写衔接句（第一段的最后一句） Step 3：根据所给段首语句写角色的情感 Step 4：补全续写每段的中间内容 4句确定框架 1. Action — Response原则 2. Conflict — Solution原则 3. Negative — Positive原则 3大续写原则 I yawned （打哈欠）as I got off the last step of the bus. I had woken early that morning, and had not been able to sleep on the long ride from Riverside High, thinking about that day's race, the Eye Opener. I had never raced in a state-wide race before. Over thirty high school teams ran, along with quite a few colleges. The rest of my team and I unloaded the bus, and we relaxed and waited for our race patiently. "Start warming up, " our coach told us, roughly forty-five minutes after we arrived. After finishing our stretches, we headed over to the starting line, eager for the race to begin. The starter walked to the middle of the field. “There will be two commands, his voice boomed, ''Runners set, then the gun. If you hear another shot, return to the starting line to start again. ” My heart raced as I got my legs ready to race. "Runners set!” the starter shouted. Bam! The gun fired, and he rushed out of our way.Adrenaline （肾上腺素）rushed through my body as I raced through the mass of runners. As I rounded the first turn, my schoolmates greeted me with heartening shouts. Then, in what felt like only one minute, I arrived at the one mile mark. "6’10", " a man declared as I ran by. I tried to ignore him, but my legs began to bum as I realized I had run a mile and still had two to go. I slowed down my pace, for I knew the second mile was the worst of al