UNIT 2 Section Ⅴ Writing—写一封关于健康生活方式的信（Word教师用书）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2022-2023学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册（人教版2019）

Section Ⅴ Writing—写一封关于健康生活方式的信 本单元的写作任务是写一封关于健康生活方式的信。这类文章属于说明文，主要包括健康生活方式的介绍、健康生活方式的意义等。 【基本框架】 【增分佳句】 ◎第一段：点明写信的目的 1．Learning that you are worried about your health, I'd like to write to tell you something about how to keep healthy.得知你担心自己的健康，我想写信告诉你关于保持健康的事情。 2．I'm writing to tell you how to live a healthy life. 我写信想告诉你，如何过健康的生活。 ◎第二段：具体介绍如何过健康的生活 1．It would be a good idea if we could take meals regularly and slowly.如果我们可以规律饮食、细嚼慢咽， 这会是个好主意。 2．Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body. 多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果对身体很有好处。 3．Running is the best workout for weight loss because it's cheap. 跑步是最好的减肥方式，因为很便宜。 4．To keep healthy, we should try to be in good mood each day.为了保持健康，我们应该尽量每天保持好心情。 5．Only by living a healthy lifestyle can you keep away from illnesses. 只有通过健康的生活方式你才能远离疾病。 ◎第三段： 表达对对方的期望和祝愿 1．I hope that you can have a healthy body. 希望你拥有健康的身体。 2．I hope that my advice will be of great help to you.希望我的建议对你能有帮助。 【写作要求】 假定你是李华，请给你的笔友汤姆(Tom)写一封信，就“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息： 1．健康的重要性； 2．给出保持健康的方法：如避免吃含太多糖和脂肪的食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼；保持积极的心态等。 注意：词数80左右。 【四步成文】 第一步：审题谋篇 第二步：遣词造句 1．保持平衡饮食对你来说很重要。 It is important for you to keep a balanced diet . 2．平衡的饮食对你的健康有好处。 Keeping a balanced diet is good to your health. 3．你应该尽量不吃含太多糖和脂肪的食物。 You should try to cut out foods containing too much sugar and fat . 4．你必须改掉那些危害你的健康的不良习惯。 You have to get rid of those bad habits damaging your health . 5．即使很忙，你也应该尽量有规律地锻炼来增强体质。 Even if you are very busy, you should try to work out regularly to strengthen your body . 第三步：句式升级 用定语从句合并升级第二步中的句1和句2。 It is important for you to keep a balanced diet, which is good to your health. 第四步：连句成篇 One possible version： Dear Tom， I'm writing to tell you something about how to keep healthy. Firstly, it is important for you to keep a balanced diet, which is good to your health.You should try to cut out foods containing too much sugar and fat.What's more, you have to get rid of those bad habits damaging your health.Last but not least, ev