Unit 2 Section Ⅳ Writing（教师用书word）-2022-2023学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册【精讲精练】译林版

Section Ⅳ　Writing 写一篇有关外星人的故事 本单元写作要求为写一篇有关外星人的故事，属于故事类文章。在写作时，需要注意按照时间顺序进行写作，且设置合理的情节。 一、写作常用词汇 1．come across　偶遇 2．have an encounter with　与……邂逅 3．in the early morning　在清早 4．at first　起初 5．shortly afterwards　不久以后 6．all of a sudden　突然 二、写作常用句式 1．When he/she heard.../On hearing.../As soon as he/she heard.../When the news reached... 2．When he/she saw this.../At the sight of.../Seeing this... 3．He/She was doing...when.../He/She was about to do...when.../He/She had done...when... 4．He/She was surprised to find... 5．Long long ago, there lived a man who was called... 假定你是李华，昨天晚上你做梦梦见了外星人，请你给你的朋友Tom写一封信，讲述这个有趣的梦。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom， Yours， Li Hua [审题谋篇] 审题 审人称：第一人称为主、第三人称为辅 审时态：一般过去时为主 谋篇 1．确定写作主题：梦见外星人的故事； 2．确定写作要点：梦见外星人的地点、过程和外星人的长相等； 3．确定常用的表达方式：定语从句，倒装句，so...that...句型等； 4．确定前后逻辑的衔接； 5．注意细节，如单词拼写、标点符号或句式结构等。 语言 平实、准确 [核心词汇] 1．alien n.　外星人 2．land vi.　着陆 3．come across　偶遇 4．fall asleep　睡着 5．wake sb up　叫醒某人 [主要句式] 1．我写信是想告诉你我的有趣的梦。 I'm writing to tell you my interesting dream. 2．在梦中我偶遇了一位外星人。 I came across an alien in the dream. 3．做完作业后，我太累了，马上就睡着了。 After finishing my homework，I was very tired so I fell asleep immediately. 4．突然，我看到一个不明飞行物降落在院子里。 Suddenly，I saw a UFO land in the yard. 5．一个外星人出来了，他看起来又高又壮，有两个头和三只眼睛。 Out came an alien，he looked tall and strong with two heads and three eyes. 6．看到这个外星人朝我走来，我惊呆了，动弹不得。 When I saw the alien walking towards me, I was too astonished to move. 7．外星人好像在说什么来跟我打招呼，但我听不懂。 The alien seemed to be saying something to greet me but I couldn't understand it. 8．就在那时，一声巨响把我叫醒了。 Just at that time，a loud noise woke me up. [句式升级] 9．句1和句2合并为含有非限制性定语从句的句子。 I'm writing to tell you my interesting dream, in which I came