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Section Ⅳ WRITING
写一篇故事类记叙文
[对应学生用书P53]
故事类文章属于记叙文。写此类文章时需要把握记叙文六要素:what,who,when,where,why,how。记叙文的重点在于“叙述”和“描写”,所以要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事和物加以描述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强,因此一篇好的记叙文的叙述要条理清晰,描写要生动形象。幽默故事更要突出出乎意料或是幽默的结尾。
[写作技巧]
1.叙述故事开端;
2.描写意外事件;
3.突出意外结局。
[典例剖析]
假定你是李华,你周末度过了一个“惊喜的”早晨,你给笔友Tom写信叙述这件事。请根据以下内容叙述:
1.早上我醒来的时候发现我起晚了,上学已经来不及了。因此我没吃早饭就拿着书包跑出了门。似乎等了一个世纪,公共汽车才来。我费力地挤上公交车,终于松了口气。
2.走了大概五分钟,我发现公交车行驶方向不对。我着急地让公交车司机停车。因为,我突然意识到今天是周末,不用上学,真是一个“惊喜的”早晨。
[词块积累]
1.wake up 醒来
2.too ...to ... 太……不能……
3.run out 跑出去
4.come into sight 出现在眼前
5.struggle to do 奋力做
6.in the wrong direction 反方向
7.so ...that ... 如此……以至于
8.all of a sudden 突然
[连词成句]
1.我醒来的时候,我发现比以往晚了。
When I woke up,I found it was later than usual before.
2.上学已经来不及了。
It was too late to go to school.
3.因此我没吃早饭就拿着书包跑出了门。
So I didn’t have breakfast and ran out with my schoolbag.
4.我似乎等了一个世纪,公共汽车才出现。
I seemed to have been waiting for a century. The bus finally came into sight.
5.我费力地挤上公交车,终于松了口气。
I struggled to get on the bus and breathed a sigh of relief.
6.行驶了五分钟后,我发现公交车行驶方向不对。
After five minutes of driving, I noticed that the bus was going in the wrong direction.
7.我着急地呼喊着让公交车司机停车。
I was so worried that I shouted to the bus driver to stop.
8.突然,我意识到今天是周末,不用上学。
All of a sudden, I realized that today is the weekend and I have no class.
9.真是一个“惊喜的”早晨啊!
What a real “surprise” morning!
[句式升级]
用非限定性定语从句连接句8和句9
All of a sudden, I realized that today is the weekend and I have no class,which is a real “surprise” morning!
[连句成篇]