读后续写描写动物之野兽语料积累2-2023届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写:描写动物之野兽语料积累:熊、狮子等 I. Wild animals ▲ Two Bears Boxing, Jostling and Parrying While Walking Two male bears were moving slowly ahead down the road, a hundred yards distant. They were on their hind legs, walking like men, shoulder to shoulder. Their walk seemed almost a dance, as when couples in the square dance moved side by side to do a figure. Suddenly they jostled each other, like wrestlers, and lifted their forepaws, and turned, snarling, each trying for the other's throat. One raked his claws across the other's head and the snarls grew to a roar. The fighting was violent for a few moments, then the pair walked on, boxing, jostling, parrying. ——Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings:The Yearling,17. 【生词】jostle /ˈdʒɒsl/v.挤,推,撞,搡 parry /ˈpæri/v. 挡开,拦挡(攻击等) hind legs 后肢;后腿 on one’s hind legs shoulder to shoulder肩并肩 side by side 并排 figure n.人形;体形 wrestler /ˈreslər/n. 摔跤选手,搏斗者 forepaw n. 前爪;前掌 snarl/snɑːl/ v. 龇牙低吼 rake /reɪk/ v.耙 claw n.爪子 roar n.咆哮;吼; 【译文】一百码外,两头公熊正沿着小路慢慢地朝前走.它们后腿直立,像人一样,肩并肩地走着.看起来,它们的步伐很像舞步,就跟方形舞中的舞伴肩并肩地踏步似的.突然,它们像摔跤手般扭打起来,都抬起前爪,转过身,怒吼着直扑对方咽喉.其中的一头一爪扫过对方的脑袋,怒吼也转成了咆哮.它们激烈地厮打了一会儿,又继续往前走,时不时来上几拳,推搡几下,接着又闪避开来. 【赏析】本段描绘了两只熊打架的场景.运用了比喻(walking like men;as when couples in the square dance moved side by side to do a figure), 拟人(boxing, jostling等)等修辞手法.通过视觉(lifted their forepaws...) 和听觉(snarling, roar),由远及近,描写了两只熊打闹的过程,生动形象.可运用于其他的野兽互逗打闹的场景. ▲ A Lioness which became Water-crazy As soon as the sun was up the whole camp trooped down to the water's edge to introduce her to the Indian Ocean.The tide was receding, at first she was nervous of the unaccustomed roar and rush of the waves.Then she sniffed cautiously at the water and bit at the foam; finally,she put her head down to drink, but her first mouthful of salt water made her wrinkle her nose and pull grimaces of disgust. However,when she saw the rest of the party enjoying a bathe, she decided to trust us and join in the fun. Very soon she became quite water-crazy. Rain pools and shallow rivers had always excited and i