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写作任务——如何写景点介绍类说明文
一、提炼课文结构与信息
二、学习语言表达
1.高频词汇:all year round, take care to do sth, a real taste of, a unique range of, varieties of, to name but a few等。
2.亮点句式
(1)定语从句:(第一段第二句)It is a very popular tourist draw that receives more visitors each year than even the Golden Gate Bridge.(第三段第二句)Traditionally, visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China.
(2)what引导的主语从句:(第二段第二句)What started as a residential area for Chinese immigrants then turned into a centre for Chinese culture.
景点介绍属于说明文,使用生动的语言对某一地点和某一环境进行具体逼真的描绘,比如城市地理位置、环境、气候、人口等自然基本状况以及城市的文化特征等。
一、基本框架
二、增分佳句
第一段:介绍基本自然概况
1.Shanghai covers an area of about 6,340 square kilometers.
上海面积约6 340平方公里。
2.Fuzhou, which is the capital of Fujian, lies in/ is located in the east of the Fujian province.
福州位于福建省的东部,是福建省的省会。
3.Covering an area of about 561 square kilometers, it has a population of 3 million.
它占地约561平方公里,有300万人口。
4.Located in Zhejiang, Hangzhou is considered as the centre of culture.
杭州位于浙江,被认为是文化中心。
5.It has four seasons, neither very hot in summer nor very cold in winter.
它有四个季节,夏天不太热,冬天不太冷。
第二段:文化特征
1.The city has a long history of 1,000 years.
这个城市有着1 000年的悠久历史。
2.Hangzhou has many places of interest, among which is the West Lake.
杭州有很多名胜,西湖是其中之一。
3.It is also the nation's political and economic centre as well as the centre for international contacts.它也是这个国家的政治和经济中心以及国际交流中心。
4.There are many places of interest in the city, which attracts millions of tourists every year.这个城市有很多名胜古迹,每年都吸引着数百万的游客。
第三段:发展变化
1.Great changes have taken place over the past five years in my hometown.在过去的五年中,我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。
2.Thanks to the reform and openup policy, China has taken on a new look.由于实行了改革开放政策,中国的面貌焕然一新。
三、写作模板
(某地)(the capital of…) is located in . It has a population of about . It is the largest city in .(介绍地理位置、人口状况等)
is the culture, education, business centre of . It is a city of