2023届高三英语写作专项之建议信课件

Write an e-mail to give suggestions Writing I am overweight. They always laugh at me. what should I do? Writing task Hu Bo is one of your friends. He is overweight, and many people always laugh at him. Therefore, he is ashamed of his figure. He wrote an e-mail to ask for help. Write an e-mail to encourage him and give him some suggestions. Write at least 100 words. Brainstorming How to write this e-mail? Person You/I Tense Present Key words Sentences Paragraphs Key words/phrases sports work out go to the gym fast food overweight feel ashamed of laugh at go on a diet weight-loss pills Sentences Sentence patterns: I suggset that you (should) do... What about/How about... If I were you, I would... It is a good way, if you... You had better... It is good for you to... Extending sentences Compound sentences and, although,but, yet, because, as, for, since... Attributive sentences which... who... that... whom... whose... where... when... why... With structure Non-finite verb ...doing.... ... done to do Paragraphs Structure Cohension(衔接) Concluding Greeting Suggesting Cohension Order first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least Pregressive what’s more; besides; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; furthermore Conclusion in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusion An e-mail written by one of you A possible version Dear Hu Bo, I am gald to receive your letter, and in your letter you said that you are always laughed at by your classmates because of your overweight. Don't worry and I believe that you will handle it very soon. Here I am going to give you some suggestions that will help you. To begin with, I believe doing regular exercise is a good way to lose weight. It is important that you do exercise for an hour every day. What's more, a balanced diet is also very helpful. You are supposed to eat lots of fruits and vegetables and you'd better not eat any junk food. Last but not least, it is not safe to take weight-l