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二、高分习作进阶
高分习作不仅要求考生能够使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇,更要学会准确运用各类衔接词衔接句子以
及段落,确保语句连贯,逻辑清晰。写作中常用的过渡词语主要分为以下几类:
一、表示时间顺序的过渡词语
firstly,firstofal,then,later,intheend,finaly,atlast,lastbutnotleast,afterthat,sincethen,mean
while,atthesametime,soon,next,alofasudden,attheweekend等。
例:LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshopping,Iputawayalthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsinthe
roomsandputtheminplace.Then/LaterIwipedthedustofalthefurniture.Afterthat/Atlast/Finaly,I
sweptandmoppedthefloors.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
Asastudent,Iamabletoatendthe
activitiesonweekends.Anditseasyforme
togettothecenter.IalsoloveanimalsandI
amwilingtohelpthem.Iknowalitlea
boutmedicalknowledge.
1. (时间顺序),asastudent,Iamabletoatend
theactivitiesonweekends.Anditseasyformetogettothecen
ter.2. (时间顺序),IloveanimalsandIamwilingto
helpthem.3. (时间顺序),Iknowalitleabout
medicalknowledge.
二、表示转折关系的过渡词语
but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,exceptfor,instead等。
例:Onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmoreconvenient.Ontheotherhand/However/Onthecontrary,ital
sohasmanydisadvantages.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
Afewmonthsago,mygrandmawentto
dosquaredancingaftersupper.Shelikes
squaredancing.Now,sheismuchhealthier
thanbefore.Shealsohasalotoffriends.
Butsomeneighborshaveacomplaintagainst
thepeoplewhodosquaredancing.
Afewmonthsago,mygrandmawenttodosquaredancingaf
tersupper.1. (时间顺序),shehasfaleninlovewith
squaredancing.Now,sheismuchhealthierthanbefore.
2. (递 进 关 系), she hasa lotoffriends.
3. (转折关系),someneighborshaveacom
plaintagainstthepeoplewhodosquaredancing.
三、表示因果关系的过渡词语
because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult等。
例:Asaresultofhiscarelessness,thewholeprojecthadtobeputofatleastonemonth.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
IwaspoorinEnglishwhenIwasin
GradeSeven.IdidntknowhowtolearnEng
lishwel.MyEnglishteacherhelpedmealot
andIhavemademuchprogressinEnglish.
IwaspoorinEnglishwhenIwasinGradeSeven.1.
(时间衔接词),IdidntknowhowtolearnEnglishwel.2.
(因果关系),Ihavemademuchprogress
inEnglish