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高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练
技巧07 如何接续首句
续写段落的8种首句接话技巧
1.用副词显现做出动作反应时的时间特征等
例如:
(2016. 10浙江卷)Para1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
【分析】用时间时间副词承接所给首句中的“it getting dark again”,同时衔接后文的环境描写“the darkness ruled the forest”。副词衔接自然、顺畅。
2.用形容词(短语)凸显人物的情感情绪
例如:
(1)(2016.10浙江卷)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face.
【分析】用形容词短语“ Desperate and hopeless”凸显了人物的情绪状态,与后面的动作“knelt down”一起再现了情境中的人物的精神状态。
(2)(2016.10浙江卷)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
【分析】用“状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句”结构体现了人物早上起来后的精神状态。
(3)(2018.06浙江卷)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
【分析】用“情绪形容词+从句”结构阐释了人物见到兔子后的心理反应。
(4)(2018.06浙江卷)Para 2: We ha