Module 8 模块话题写作训练2022-2023学年外研版英语八年级上册

八上（外研版）Module 8 模块话题写作训练 -----讲故事/描述自身经历 Class_________Name___________Number_________ 每年都有许多人在交通事故中受伤、死亡。假如你是学校《英语周刊》的小记者，你在上学的路上目睹了一起交通事故。请你根据下面的提示，以“A Traffic Accident Happened”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，向同学们报道这次事故，并警示大家遵守交通法规。 提示：1.时间：星期四上午七点半； 2. 地点：云南路 3. 原因：汽车司机正在打电话，没有看到一个女生骑自行车过马路； 4. 结果：女生伤得很严重，有人报了警并帮忙把她送到了附近的医院 A Traffic Accident Happened ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1、 写作步骤 （1） 开篇点题 1. A traffic accident happened + 时间/地点状语 2. I saw a traffic accident when I was on my way to school. （2） 描述事故：起因、经过、结果等 1. A girl was crossing the road on her bike when a car hit her. 2. An accident happened as a result of /because of the driver’s carelessness. 3. A girl was hit by a car. That’s because the driver was talking on his phone at that time. 4. He was so careless that he didn’t see the girl. 5. As a result, she was badly hurt. （3） 总结警示 1. That’s why we should always follow the traffic rules. 2. Drivers mustn’t talk on their phone because it’s dangerous for themselves and other people. （4） 巧链接 本文是描述事件类的文章，写作时应注意first, second, also, what’s more, last 等链接性词语以及时间、地点、原因等状语的运用。 （五）句子升格 Drivers mustn’t talk on their phone because it’s dangerous for themselves and other people. （用not only...but also...升格） ___________________________________________________________ （5） 范文 A Traffic Accident Happened A traffic accident happened at half past seven on Thursday morning on Yunnan Road. A girl was crossing the road on her bike when a car hit her. The driver was talking on his mobile phone at that time, so he didn’t see the girl. As a result, she was badly hurt. Someone called the police and helped t