话题20 居住环境-2022-2023学年八年级【飞跃英语】话题写作

飞跃英语·话题写作八年级 话题20 居住环境 话题分析 本话题为“居住环境(Living environment)”,要求学生学会描述自己周边环境的变化，并适当表 达自己的感受。在写这类文章时，要注意正确运用时态，内容合理，行文整洁、完整。 中考题中涉及此类话题的书面表达多为谈论私人物品和周围事物的发展与变化，常采用现在 与过去对比的方法，以突出其变化。写作中，常用a beautiful place,.beside a wide river,ten years ago,used to,in the last ten years,work hard I have had...for/since...great changes have taken place in...I love my hometown..I love its people.等句型表达某地的变化及发表感慨。 经典范例 【写作任务】 根据表格所给内容要，点，以“The Changes in My Hometown'”为题写一篇英语短文。要，点如下： 1.空气清新，环境很好； 过去 2.房屋又小又旧，人们走路或是骑车去上班： 3.是一个宁静的地方。 1.住房宽敞明亮，很多人都有了自己的汽车； 现在 2这些变化给年轻人带来了现代化的生活，他们都感到很高兴； 3.树比以前少了，环境不如以前好了。 将来 请你展望家乡的未来(1一2句)。 要求：1.字迹工整，要点全面； 2.100词左右。 【思路点拨】 审题：1.定体裁：说明文； 2.定时态：一般过去时，一般现在时，一般将来时； 3.定人称：第三人称。 布局： the air was fresh,the cnvironment was good, 描述家乡的过去 the houses were small and old,people went to work on foot or by bike,a quiel place the houses are big and bright,many people 描述家乡的现在 have their own cars.bring young people a modern life,fewer trees,the environment is nol as good as belore 展望家乡的未来 I hope my hometown will he... ·60· 话题20 居住环境 【范文】 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has dhanged a lot in recent years. In the past, the air here was very fresh and the environment was good. The houses were small and old. People went to work on foot or by bike. It used to be a very quiet plae. Now things are quite dfferent. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. The changes have brought young people a modern life. They all feel happy.But there are fewer trees, and the environment is not as good as before I hope my hometown wil be more and more beautiful so that we can live a happier life 三素材积累 |inone's opinion依某人之见____ 【句式链】 ①Last Sunday, we had a yard sale in our community.上周日,我们在社区举行庭院拍卖会. ②So,we'd better not spit and throw any litter onto the groud.因此,我们最好不要随地吐痰,乱 扔垃圾. ③First,weshould save resource and reduce waste.首先,我们应该节约资源,减少浪费. ④More than 200 people tok part in the activity.超过200个人参加这项活动. ⑤Let's do our best to make our school more beau