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话题17大自然及动物保护
话题分析
本话题为“大自然及动物保护(Nature and animal protection)”,写作任务是写关于保护珍稀动
植物及大自然的短文。
中考试题中涉及此类话题的多为濒危动物保护、环境保护等内容。写作时,要正确使用基数
词及形容词或副词的比较级和最高级描述现状,如:The number of..is getting smaller and smaller.
运用“We should try our best to.../I think people should/,shouldn't..”句型提出保护动物及大自然的
合理化建议。
经典范例
【写作任务】
由于环境污染、人类的残杀,很多野生动物正濒临灭绝。请以“How to Protect Wild Animals'”为
题,写一篇英语短文,说明保护野生动物的重要性以及怎样保护它们。
内容要点:1.野生动物濒临灭绝的原因:
2.保护野生动物的重要性;
3.我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。
写作要求:1.词数100左右;
2.语句通顺,逻辑清晰;
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
【思路点拨】
审题:1.定体裁:说明文;
2.定时态:一般现在时;
3.定人称:第一人称。
布局:
引出话题
Many wild animals are in danger...
living places are polluted;
何保
原因
some people kill them for...
分析原因
并
planl more trees;
野生动物
提出建议
make laws lo slop them
建议
from being killed.
总结全文
Let's work logether to protect the wild animals.
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话题17大自然及动物保护
【范文】
How to Protect Wild Animals
Many wild animals are in danger because their living environment has changed a lot.
With the development of cities,the air is polluted and the water is not dean any more.Wild
animals'living places are polluted badly.At the same time,some people kill them for their fur.
skin,teeth and meat.
As we all know,animals are our friends,so it's our duty to protect them.We can plant
more trees to make homes for them and make laws to stop them from being killed.
Let's work together to protect the wild animals.
素材积累
【短语箱】
feel free(可以)随便(做某事)
as far as I know就我所知
take in吸入;吞入(体内)
in the face of面对(问题、困难等)
even though/.if即使;虽,然
at birth出生时
u即to到达(某数量、程度等);至多有;不多于
walk into走路时撞着
fall over绊倒;摔倒;跌倒
or so
大约
die from死于
8,844 meters high8844米高
get smaller and smaller(数量)越来越少
a symbol of...…的象征
..the importance of..…的重要性
endangered animal濒危动物
cut down
砍伐
one of the main reasons主要原因之一
【句式链】
①Yesterday we did a survey about the best places in our city.昨天,我们做了关于我们城市最好
的地方的调查。
②There are many interesting places in my town.在我们这个镇上有许多有趣的地方。
③I am glad to tell you something about..我很高兴告诉你一些关于.…的事情。
④The Nansha Islands are a group of islands..南沙是一个群岛。
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