内容正文:
高分写作冲关练了
高分写作冲关练
写一篇人物介绍类记叙文
4.毕业于graduate from
【写作任务】
5.熟练掌握have a good knowledge of
请根据下列提示,以“My Favourite
6.关心care about
Teacher'”为题写一篇英语短文,要求文章通
7.处于困境be in trouble
顺,要点全面。可适当增加细节以使行文连
8.取得进步make progress
贯。词数:80左右。
【素材积累】
1.姓名:李华;性别:男;年龄:26;科目:
l.外貌特征:beautiful,fat,thin,ordinary-loo
英语
king,good-looking,handsome,pretty,
2.特点:
short,tall等。
(1)长得不算很帅但是很有吸引力,与学
He is a smart young man who is always
生关系融洽;
well-dressed.
(2)北京师范大学毕业,英语知识丰富,口
She is a small,thin girl with long brown hair.
语非常流利:
2.性格特征:gentle,bright,confident,friendly,
(3)关心学生,工作勤奋努力、热情、有耐
polite,generous,humorous,be ready to help
心、认真负责。
other people,care more about others,
【审题立意】
warm-hearted,kind,patient,talkative等。
第一步明确要求
Mary is a lively young girl with patience
本文要求写一篇描写老师的记叙文。人
and imagination.
称应为第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
3.兴趣爱好:be good at,be fond of,be inter-
第二步确定段落
ested in,be crazy about,do well in,have a
Part1李华老师的基本情况
strong desire to do,long for,put one's heart
Part2李华老师的专业情况
into,enjoy等。
Part3李华老师的工作情况
As a boy,Kim enjoys basketball,tennis and
Part4自己的感受
especially football.
【必备词汇】
4.评价:be respected by,be honored as/for,be
1.看起来很帅look handsome
considered as/to be,be famous as,make
2.有吸引力attractive
contributions to,set a good example to,be
3.相处得很好get on well with
thought highly of,speak highly of,admire,
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UNIT 3 FAMILY MATTERS
be popular with等。
Mr Li graduated from Beijing Normal
【完成句子】
University and has a good knowledge of Eng-
1.我最喜爱的老师是李华老师。他教我们
lish.He speaks very fluent English and we all
英语。
admire him very much.What impresses me
(一般表达)My favourite teacher is Li Hua.
most is that Mr Li works very hard and he
He teaches us English.
cares about everybody in his class.What's
(句式升级)My favourite teacher is Li Hua,who
more,he is very enthusiastic and patient and
teaches us English.(who引导的定语从句)
whenever we are in trouble,he helps us out.
2.李老师工作非常努力,关心班里的每一个学
What a good teacher!I believe I will
生,这给我印象最深。
make great progress in his class.
(一般表达)Mr Li works very hard and he
【迁移训练】
cares