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飞跃英语·话题写作八年级
话题10
谈论结果
话题分析
本话题为“谈论结果(Talk about consequences)”。这类书面表达体裁丰富,形式多样,可以是书
信或演讲稿等。在写作时,要紧紧围绕这一中心话题。假设要大胆,有可议论性。谈论的内容要充
实,尽量用较为规范的词语和句型。在写作时还要注意所叙述的事情的发生条件及产生结果的顺序。
本话题涉及的写作体裁一般是议论文,建议类作文是中考较为常见的作文类型。这类文章常
采用“三段论”式结构,即提出问题、分析问题和解决问题。在运用f引导的条件状语从句时要恰
当地使用时态,使文章符合逻辑、条理清晰。对自己情况的假设,则应用第一人称。
经典范例
【写作任务】
最近,你美国的笔友Toy在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼,他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李
华的身份给他写一封邮件,提出你的一些建议。
建议内容包括:遇到问题多倾诉,多与他人分享情绪,尊重他人,与人为善,诚实守信…
要求:1.词数100左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇:share;solve;respect;be friendly;be honest to
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates.I'm glad to help you.
I hope everything will go well with you soon
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
审题:1.定体裁:应用文(电子邮件);
2.定时态:一般现在时或一般将来时;
3.定人称:以第二人称为主。
布局:
引出话题
Here are some suggestions for you.
First.you should talk to your parents..
给出建议
Second.you are supposed to respect others..
Third,you should be friendly to...
last but not least,you have to he honest to...
表达祝愿
I hope everything will go well with you soon
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话题10谈论结果心
【范文】
Dear Tony.
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with dassmates.I'm glad to help you.Here
are some suggestions for you.
First,if you have difficulties,you should talk to your parents,your teachers or your
friends and share your sadness and happiness with them.They will help you solve the problem.
Second,you are supposed to respect others to get along with them
Third,you should be friendly to people around you.You can help each other.
Last but not least,you have to be honest to your friends.Then you will make more
friends.I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
三
素材积累
【短语箱】
talk to sb.
和某人交谈
make mistakes犯错
tell sb.to do sth.
告诉某人做某事
ask sb.to do sth.
要求某人做某事
ask for advice征求建议
ask sb.for help
向某人求助
solve the problem
解决问题
run away from
逃避
be afraid to do sth.
害怕做某事;不敢做某事
in trouble
处于困境中
【句式链】
①Students these days often have a lot of worries.现在的学生经常有很多烦恼。
②Sometimes they have problems with their schoolwork.有时他们在学业上遇到问题。
3 Problems and worri