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飞跃英语·话题写作八年级
话题6谈论将来的打算
话题分析
本话题为“谈论将来的打算(Talk about future intentions)”。“谈论将来的打算”这类书面表达
体裁丰富,形式多样,可以是日记、书信或邮件等,文章时态要使用一般将来时,通常以描述将来的
打算为主。
本话题常见的命题形式是写书信或电子邮件。在写作中,合理使用grow up,take up,make a
promise,have to do with,move to,the coming year,next year等短语;灵活使用be going to do sth.,
want to be,learn to do sth.以及plan to do sth.表达将来打算的句式。
经典范例
【写作任务】
假设你是李明,你梦想成为一名医生。请根据提示,给你的朋友李华写一封邮件,告诉他你将
如何实现自己的梦想。
提示:get excellent grades
focus on science classes(Science classes are required for medical schools.
improve my physical health
要求:1.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2.不少于100词。
Dear Li Hua,
Yours,
Li Ming
【思路点拨】
审题:1.定体裁:记叙文;
2.定时态:一般将来时;
3.定人称:第一人称。
布局:
I've decided to he a doctor when I grow up.
梦想是什么
not easy,make a plan
college,grades,work hard;focus on science classes;
我的梦想职业
如何实现
get more exercise,improve,long hours,healthy
do my best,come lrue
表明决心
.16.
话题6谈论将来的打算
【范文】
Dear Li Hua,
I've decided to be a doctor when I grow up.It's not easy to become a doctor,so I
make a plan for it.
Firstly,to get into the best college or medical school,I need to get excellent grades.So
I'm going to work harder to get better grades.
Secondly.I'm going to focus on science dasses because they are required for medical
schools.
Thirdly,I plan to get more exercise to improve my physical health.Most doctors work
long hours,and it's bad for health.So I need to have a healthy body.
All in all.I'm going to do my best to make my dream come true.
What are you going to do in the future?I'm looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Ming
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素材积累
【短语箱】
grow up
长大;成熟
go to college上大学
be able to能够做某事
be good at擅长
try one's best尽某人最大的努力
come true
实现:成为现实
decide to do sth.
决定做某事
take up a hobby培养一项爱好
make sb.a better person
open your eyes to the world开阔(你的)眼界
让某人成为一个更好的人
【句式链】
①It can make your dream come true.它可以使你的梦想成真。
2 There are different ways to succeed.有不同的成功途径。
3 I plan to..我打算…
④I'm going to do sth.我计划做某事。/我将要做某事。
⑤Here are some ideas about how to make your dream come true..这里有一些使你的梦想成真的
主意。
6 What do you want to be when