话题1 旅行经历-2022-2023学年八年级【飞跃英语】话题写作

话题1旅行经历脸 话题1旅行经历 话题分析 本话题为“旅行经历”。与之相关的书面表达体裁丰富，形式多样，可以是日记、书信或故事 等，文章的时态要使用一般过去时，通常以描述做过的事情为主。 本话题常见的命题形式主要是日记、书信或电子邮件，命题内容多以游览为主，根据提示叙述 在节假日里旅游的大致情况。在写作中，合理使用first,then,when,at last等表示顺序的词，这样 会使行文流畅、生动、层次清晰；尽量使用have a great time以及I hope..等表达自己的心情及愿望 的句式，使自己的作文语言丰富，更具可读性。 经典范例 【写作任务】 假设你是李华，上周六，你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下 信息，用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。 Activities Feelings make zongzi visit a tea museum learn chinese character 要求：1.短文必须包括表格中的所有内容，并表达感受； 2.词数100左右； 3.文中不得出现与身份相关的信息。 【思路点拨】 审题：1.定体裁：应用文； 2.定时态：一般过去时； 3.定人称：第一人称和第三人称。 布局： 情境导入 who/when Who:Peler I/When:last Saturday at home make zongzi 发生发展 museum/learn a lot about Chinese lea where/whal at school learn Chinese characters 发生发展 proud /our rich culture how 。1 飞跃英语·话题写作八年级 【范文】 Last Saturday.I took Peter,a student from America,to experience some Chinese culture.Everything he experienced that day was a great attraction to him. In the morning,Peter and I went to visit a tea museum,where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea.After that,I took him home and taught him to make zongzi.Although it was a bit difficult,he still enjoyed it.In the afternoon,we had a Chinese dass,learning the Chinese characters.He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush,and even lost himself in it. Peter kept saying"amazing"all the way.It made me feel really proud of our rich culture. 三 素材积累 【短语箱】 go on a trip 去旅行 take quite a few photos照很多照片 set off出发 many places of interest 许多名胜古迹 teach oneself 自学 feel like 想要…；感觉像… take part in参加 a great chance to do一个做…的好机会 summer/winter vacation 暑假/寒假 can't help doing忍不住做某事 so/such...that... 如此的…以至于… try different local food品尝不同的当地美食 buy some presents for my friends one symbol of... 一个…的标志 给我的朋友们买了一些礼物 【句式链】 ①We went there by..我们乘坐…去那里。 2 The air there was fresh and we could hear birds singing in the tree.那里的空气新鲜并能听到树 上的鸟叫声。 3 The life there was relaxing..那里的生活是放松的。 ④We did a lot of things,but one thing impressed me a lot was that.我们做了许多事，但是令我 印象深刻的是… ⑤What surpri