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课时达标(六)|35分写作规范练(一)
第一节 (满分10分)
(2022·黑龙江大庆实验中学开学考)Nowadays, ① great number of people, especially young people, like ordering meals online.It's not ②.First, as the pace of modern life is becoming faster and faster, people ③ less time to cook even one meal for themselves.Second, the development of technology ④ us smart phones and new apps, ⑤ may lead to the increase in online service.However, we should pay more attention to food.As we all know it⑥, our health is closely related to what we eat.Although the service provides us ⑦ convenience, we must take the food safety ⑧ consideration.Homemade food is cleaner and healthier, ⑨ I prefer to cook food at home rather than ⑩ meals online.
①解析 句意:如今,很多人,尤其是年轻人,喜欢在网上订餐。the number of ……的数量,a number of一些,大量的,此处表示“大量的”,故将the改为a。
②解析 is为系动词,后接形容词作表语;此处修饰的是物,需用ing结尾的形容词,故将surprised改为surprising。
③解析 句意:首先,随着现代生活的节奏越来越快,人们自己做饭的时间越来越少。此处陈述客观事实,用一般现在时;主语为people,谓语动词使用原形,故将had改为have。
④解析 句意:第二,科技的发展给我们带来了智能手机和新的应用程序,这可能会导致在线服务的增加。主语为the development of technology,谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式,故将bring改为brings。
⑤解析 此处引导非限制性定语从句,先行词smart phones and new apps,指物,在定语从句中作主语,需用关系代词which引导,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,故将what改为which。
⑥解析 句意:我们都知道,我们的健康与我们吃什么密切相关。as引导非限制性定语从句,并且在从句中作宾语,it是多余的,故将it删除。
⑦句意:虽然服务为我们提供了方便,但我们必须考虑食品安全。provide sb with sth提供某人某物,故在us后面加with。
⑧解析 take…into consideration把……考虑进去,故将to改为into。
⑨解析 句意:自制的食物更干净更健康,所以我更喜欢在家做饭而不是在网上订餐。上下文是因果关系,需用连词so连接,故将but改为so。
⑩解析 prefer to do…rather than do…宁愿做……而不愿做……,故将ordering改为order。
第二节 (满分25分)
(2022·安徽宿州月考改编)假定最近你校传统中国画社团正打算向全校招募成员,请你以社团的名义写一则招募启事,内容如下:1.启事目的;2.加入社团的好处;3.如何加入。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One possible version:
New Members Wanted
The Traditional Chinese Painting Club founded two weeks ago is looking for new members.
By participating in our wellorganized activities, you will benefit a great deal from them.Not only can you cultivate your patience and imagination, but also you can reach a higher level of artistic thinking.Learning traditional Chinese painting, you will get easier acc