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读后续写高分技能(六)
—精彩结尾
读后续写中常见的结尾方式
在读后续写中,精彩的结尾好似画龙点睛,让人回味无穷。常见的结尾方式有首尾呼应、主题升华、自然结尾、以景结情等。
除基本的揭示故事结尾外,在表现手法上,结尾还应与前文伏笔照应,使人觉得在情理之中;与前文形成对比,点明主旨,深化主题。在塑造人物形象上,结尾应表现人的心理、性格、品质、经历、命运、能力等。在故事情节上,结尾还可以照应标题和开头,使故事结构完整。
1.首尾呼应
2.主题升华
3.自然收尾
4.以景结情
5.对话结尾
6.画面定格
结尾与开头照应,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。
1.高考链接--2021年新高考Ⅰ卷真题
开头: His usual big toothy smile was absent today.这篇读后续写的开头写到他的笑容消失不见了。
结尾:His big toothy smile came back again.(他的笑容回来了,结尾与开头照应,深化主题)
一.首尾呼应
2.高考链接--浙江高考真题
开头:It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.(开头爸爸想给我一个难忘的假期)
结尾:Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.
(结尾这是我经历的最刺激的假期)
主题升华式结尾,也称哲理式结尾,即在结尾用富含哲理的语句,总结全文,升华主旨,并给人以启发。同学们平常可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子,如果引用得当,不仅能深化主题,而且能启人深思,给读者以有益的启迪。
注意:不可生搬硬套名言警句,一定要具体文本具体分析。
二.主题升华
佳句积累
1. The world always makes way for dreamers.
2. Everyone is the architect of his own fate.
3. Life is full of laughter and tears. Only by accepting both can we enjoy life.
4. Sometimes a little kindness can make a big difference.
5. Without the dark, you would never see the stars.
6. The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity. The optimist sees opportunity in every difficulty.
7. Storms make trees take deeper roots.
8. Dreams that seem impossible can be realized with determination and persistence, no matter what the odds are.
在结尾营造画面感,寓情于景,让读者体味不言情而情无限的感觉。
三.以景结情
In a short time, he started out on his new business. And much sooner than could be expected, he returned with an empty basket. Never had he earned so much money before in his life. When he found that it was all to be his, he was so delighted that he could hardly speak, but his bright smiling face spoke for him. Every day he had at least fifty cents to take home, and often more. One night, he went home with some food bought for his family. Gentle breeze wiping his face, a