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读后续写高分技能（五） —生动的对话描写 （1）对话描写为推动故事情节服务，是情节发展的一个环节，每段出现一两句即可，不宜过多； （2）对话描写要体现真情实感； （3）对话描写不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇； （4）对话描写尽可能结合动作描写或情感描写，增强画面感； （5）对话描写中可以用感叹词表示说话人的喜、怒、哀、乐等情绪。 一、对话描写的基本原则 句型1：“...,” he said, （sth) doing...  （sth) doing，he said,  “...” say后接doing/done/独立主格作状语，结合动作描写，增强画面感。 （1) “I'll get us some coffee,” she said, ___________(head)for the kitchen.“我去给我们拿点咖啡” 她说着朝厨房走去。 （2）Glaring at me with his frightening eyes , he yelled, “You’re such an idiot.” heading 二、对话描写常用句型 (3) “That's nice,” Alex said quietly, focusing on his plate. (4) “Why did they have to kill the dog?” she said, with her eyes full of tears. 句型2：“...,” he said as/when/before/as if...  say后接状语从句，增加了动作等细节描写。例如： 1) “Watch out!” she shouted_______the car started to move. “当心!” 当汽车开始移动时，她喊道。 as 2) “Dear me! I wish I hadn't cried so much before,” said Alice as she swam about the lake, trying to find her way out. 当爱丽丝在湖里到处游，设法找到出路时，她说道, “天哪！但愿我以前没有哭得那么凶就好了。” 句型3： “...,” he said, and (then he) did.... say后接并列谓语或接并列句，增加了动作描写。例如： (1) “Yes, I think so,” he said reluctantly, ______left the study. “是的，我想是的,” 他不情愿地说，然后离开了书房。 and (2) “Drive safely,” he said, and waved goodbye. “小心开车,” 他说着挥手告别。 句型4： ...did.., did, and said, “...” say前有系列动作，构成并列谓语，引号内首字母大写。例如： 1) He paused, looked straight into her eyes, and said in a quiet voice, “That's true.” 他停下来，直视着她的眼睛，平静地说: “那是真的。” 2) He grinned, waved, and said, “Hi!” 他咧嘴笑了笑，挥挥手说: “嗨!” 3) A large middle-aged lady patted me on the back and said, “Nice to see you again.” 一位身材高大的中年女士拍了拍我的后背说: “很高兴再次见到你。” 句型5：“...,” he said +副词或短语. say后接方式状语，说明说话的方式，说得更具体。例如： 1)“Of course,” Nancy replied with a smile. “当然,” 南希笑着回答。 2)“I'm sorry,” she said with a sigh. “对不起,” 她叹了口气说。 3) “Thank you, sir,” whispered Paul gratefully. “谢谢，先生,” Paul满心感激地嘟哝着。 句型6： “….” +动作描写的句子 不出现say对话标志。例如： 1) “I don't believe you any more.” He turned around, slammed the door and stormed out. “我再也不相信你了。” 他转过身，砰的一声关上门，冲了出去。 2) “I