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读后续写高分技能(三)
—生动的动作描写
1. 精选动词,精准描述
shout cry yell scream
rush dash
smile laugh
whisper murmur
jump/spring to one's feet // struggle to one’s feet
glance stare gaze glimpse
adverbs: tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/ desperately/fiercely(fight) violently/swiftly
in+n.:in terror/excitement/ shock/ sorrow/ in a low(weak/sweet) voice
with+情感名词:with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fear
with +身体部位:with its sharp eyes/ her shaky hand/her pale lips
Suddenly, A moving dot(点) was spotted. As it drew nearer, Jane saw it clearly. "The helicopter,“ Jane murmured, sprang up and rushed to the center of an open area. She waved her yellow blouse desperately and yelled at the helicopter with excitement. To her great joy, this time she was spotted. Soon afterwards, the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped out. The moment Tom's eyes fell upon her, Jane threw herself into his arms. "Honey, Never will I leave you again. "Jane sobbed. The reunited couple hugged each other tightly.
2. 添加副词和介词短语来修饰动词
Complete the short passage with proper adverbs in the box below.
It’s sunny that day. Sabrina was _________happy because they would go to the Goldshore beach for family activities.When they got there, Sabrina became one of the happy tourists who ________ sat here, enjoying the soft sunlight. ________, something strange happened, there was something wrong about the sea water.
It ________ occurred to Sabrina that these were signs of an approaching tsunami, so she _________ ran to a safety officer and told him________about the danger. The safety officer asked tourists to leave the beach as _______as they could after hearing this. So_________, nobody got hurt because of her timely warning.
however extremely immediately seriously
fortunately suddenly comfortably fast
immediately
seriously
fortunately
fast
extremely
comfortably
However
suddenly
1. 上车
He stopped the taxi, jumped in