13 社会正能量与志愿者招募 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析

13 社会正能量与志愿者招募 NO.1 （2022·重庆·中考真题） 科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。 要求： 1. 80-120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 1. 起因，经过； 2. 结果，感悟； 3. …… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文赏析】        A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.        I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident. From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset. 【解析】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 NO.2 （2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 （1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。 （2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。 （3）树干太沉，她搬不动。 （4）人们过来帮忙。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down   挡住block   树枝branch   树干trunk 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you. Last Friday, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________