内容正文:
A letter of advice
高考应用文写作之建议信
建议信特点及写作步骤
题型特点:建议信是针对某事或某个问题向收信人提出建议和忠告的信件,建议信通常简明扼要,目的明确,具有合理性和说服性。
写作思路与步骤 :
第一步:陈述事由+写信目的
第二步:提出具体建议及理由
第三步:表达本人愿望
【篇首句】
①Learning that you have some trouble in learning English, I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.
我知道你在学习英语方面有困难,因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
② Hearing that you are going to university in Beijing, I’d like to express my warmest welcome to you. Here are some suggestions about choosing university and preparations for it.
You’d better do / You are supposed to do…, which will help you…
It would be a good idea to do…,by doing this you will
I highly recommend that… If I were you, I would do…,
Why not do…? In this way, you will not only… but also….
【篇中句】
1. I highly recommend that you make some friends, with whom you can share your feelings.
2. Why not take part in some after-class activities, which will give you a chance to relax yourself.
3. If I were you, I would go out to visit some places and enjoy Chinese food, this will help me suit to the new environment quickly.
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【篇尾句】
1. Hope my advice will be helpful.
2. Hope my advice will be beneficial to you.
3. If you have further questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.
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假如你是李华,你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰:不适应新的学习环境,很孤独。请给她回复邮件,内容包括:
表示理解给予安慰;2.提出建议并给出理由
注意: 1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
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Thinking
Thinking (审题)
Step 1
体裁:
建议信
话题:
如何适应新环境
时态:
一般现在时,一般
将来时
人称:
第一人称,
第二人称
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①Thinking (审题)
②Outlining(列提纲,写要点)
③Expanding(扩词成句)
④Linking(连句成篇)
⑤Polishing(润色定稿)
How to Write a composition
Para.1 开头
Para.2 正文
Para.3 结尾
Outlining (列出提纲)
Step 2
要点二
假如你是李华,你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰:不适应新的学习环境,很孤独。请给她回复邮件,内容包括:
表示理解给予安慰;2.提出建议并给出理由
注意: 1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
要点一
表示理解并给予安慰+写信目的
建议及原因
表达愿望
正文:
建议及原因
Outlining (列出提纲,写出要点)
Step 2
2. take part in some activities to relax
1. make friends to share feelings with them
3. go out to visit some places and enjoy Chinese food to