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Section Ⅳ Writing
Writing a reflection
本单元的写作任务是描述故事,并对故事进行反思、评论,属于议论文文体。 在写作过程中一些技巧需要灵活地掌握和运用:
1.描述故事,准确把握评论对象。
针对故事内容,把握真正内涵,对评论对象有准确的把握,才能形成自己的见解,才能形成自己的观点或评论的中心。
2.确定评论点,有明确的评价。
对故事的评价一定要明确,要实事求是有理有据。
3.采用叙议结合、评析结合的方法实施写作。
“叙”与“议”的关系,实质上是论据同论点,材料同观点的关系,“叙”是为“议”服务的;“析”与“评”的关系,实际上是论证同论点的关系,“析”是为“评”服务的。在写作中,叙、议、评这几个方面应该是统一并且要有机地结合在一起。
1.写作模板
(事件) happened (地点)(时间).Luckily/Surprisingly/To one's surprise/To one's enjoyment,(结果).
At first,(事情进行的情况).Then/Suddenly,(情况发生转变).Later,(情况的变化).In the end/At last,(事情的结局).In my opinion,/I think(观点或看法).If(条件),(希望或建议).
2.常用句式
(1)The story/novel describes that ...
这个故事/小说描写了……
(2)The story/novel is making waves in China and abroad.
这个故事/小说在国内外引起了轰动。
(3)The story/novel is well morth seeing.
这个故事/小说非常值得一看。
(4)One interesting anecdote contained in the story/novel is that...
这个故事/小说中有一个有趣的轶事……
(5)I think/In my opinion/From my point of view...
我认为……
(6)We are always finding new beauties in...
我们总能在……中发现新的美妙之处。
(7)What I have to admit is that...
我不得不承认的是……
一、写作任务
请阅读下面这则寓言故事,谈谈自己的看法。
注意:词数80左右。
An old woman had a cat. The cat was very old; she could not run quickly,and she could not bite,because she was so old. One day the old cat saw a mouse; she jumped and caught the mouse. But she could not bite it; so the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away,because the cat could not bite it. Then the old woman became very angry because the cat had not killed the mouse. She began to hit the cat. The cat said,“Do not hit your old servant. I have worked for you for many years,and I would work for you still,but I am too old. Do not be unkind to the old,but remember what good work the old did when they were young.”
二、步骤探究
(一)谋篇
体裁
议论文
话题
尊敬父母
时态
一般过去时
人称