必考点07 读后续写-【对点变式题】2021-2022学年高一英语下学期期中必考题精准练（译林版2020）

必考点07 读后续写 【解题技巧提炼】 （一）语言的丰富性 1. 词汇、句式、语法的多样性 句式结构：简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。 语法结构：主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、虚拟语气的使用情况。 词汇选择：常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。 修辞手法：比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。 2.情感表达的多样性 通过主人公的话语，行为，想法，外貌及周围环境来表达主人中情感及其变化。 3.动词使用的丰富性 如：用更明确的单词替代“say” 方式：shout, scream, yell, roar, cry, whisper, interrupt, add, continue, tell, remark, tell, predict, repeat, guess, imply 态度：refuse, agree, admit, complain, smile, urge, apologize, sigh, beg, explain, promise, comfort, compromise, warn. 问答：ask, wonder, doubt, answer, reply. 通过副词及介词短语等，使“say”表达的更加形象： firmly, excitedly, seriously, jokingly, sincerely... in great surprise/a low voice/a soft voice With delight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/respect/satisfaction/caution/patience... 通过恰当的动作描写让叙述更加生动： Eyes: stare/glare at, look her in the eye/ with her eyes shining/ eyes filled with tears/eyes sparkle with excitement/gratitude Hands: pat him on the shoulder/head, grasp/ hold one’s hands/ point to sb/sth, wave his hands Head:nod/shake his head violently （二）语篇的连贯性 1. 内容连贯：故事大意一致，写作意图一致 2. 语句连贯 —— 衔接词的准确使用 but/however, nevertheless, whereas, although, though, unfortunately, instead, on the contrary, besides, moreover, furthermore, what's more, what's worse worse still, so, thus, therefore, hence consequently, accordingly, as a result 3. 语言连贯 —— 语言风格一致 4. 结构连贯 —— 前后呼应 关于衔接： 1. 关注段落内部句与句之间的衔接； 2. 关注与续写段落首句之间的衔接； 3. 关注两个续写段落之间的衔接； 4. 关注上下文间的前后呼应。 读后续写最终检查 1. 与所给句子衔接是否自然 2. 第二段与第一段逻辑是否一致 3. 续写文章与原短文表达中心观点是否一致 4. 是否用具象的单词使细节生动形象 5. 是否用了恰当的连接词使段落间过渡自然 6. 文章中是否有时态，单复数，动词形式等语法方面的错误 题型一 关于亲情的读后续写 例题1.【2020-2021 年江苏省南京市高一春学期英语学科期中考试试卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A boy on in-line skates zoomed around the corner and crashed into me before I jumped out of the way. We fell into a sprawling(摊开四肢躺着) heap as the box I’d been carrying flew from my hands and landed in the street with a sickening beat. A moment later, a car whizzed past, sending the box spinning in circles. The skater got up, mumbled sorry, and sped off around the c