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Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
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Unit 1
SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
写作培优
Section Ⅳ Writing—Write a description of a person
Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
写作培优
人物描写
一、文体特点
人物描写是记叙文的一种。是对人物外貌、个性以及主要事迹和贡献进行描述。
二、审题谋篇
[审题定调]
对人物的描写,首先要对此人进行简要的介绍,包括生平、事件、职业、贡献等。其次,挑选出此人一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写,要尽可能的详细,这影响到人们对他的整体评价。最后,对此人进行客观评价,包括其人格、贡献以及人格的评论。
Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
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[谋篇布局]
体裁
记叙文
话题
某人
时态
一般现在时/一般过去时
人称
第三人称
结构
首段:引出话题,总览介绍
中段:具体介绍主要事迹、贡献、影响等
尾段:表示自己的看法或人格的评价
Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
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三、知识储备
[增分佳句]
1.介绍人物的姓名、出身、外貌特征
①He had fair hair and blue eyes.
②Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in kentucky on February 12,1809.
③She is tall and slim with big eyes and black hair.
④She was a young woman who was studying art.
⑤He is a goodlooking,kindhearted man.
Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
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2.介绍人物的成就、贡献或成绩
①During her career life,she obtained 132 championships,including 4 Olympic championships.
②When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in science/literature/music/...
③His stories,most of which are short ones,give people surprising endings.
④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have,and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
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3.介绍人物的影响及人们的评价
①He became famous for his newly theory.
②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
③We regard him as our model.
④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
⑤Such is Zhong Nanshan,a simple man with great achievements in medicine.
⑥He will be always respected and for his contributions to...
⑦Lang Ping has set us a good example both in spirits and sports.
Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
英语•选择性必修 第二册(配RJ版)
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四、典题演练
[题目要求]
假定下周日是父亲节,某英语刊物正在进行“我的父亲”的征文活动。请按照下面所提供的主要内容,以“我的父亲”为题,与一篇短文。
1.你父