Part Three 读后续写(continuation writing)（Word教参）-【状元桥】2022高考英语一轮总复习（译林版 新高考地区专用）

Part Three　读后续写(continuation writing)  题型解读 【选材特点】 1．阅读材料一般为350词左右的记叙文。 2．文章不完整，但内容浅显易懂，能延伸。 【写作要求】 1．在阅读材料的后面续写约150词左右的文字，与前文构成一个完整的故事。 2．考生要续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。 3．分两段，这两段中各段的词数多少没有限定。 4．续写一般分为两类：半开放性续写和完全开放性续写。半开放性续写要求考生务必根据文章的逻辑推理续写；完全开放性续写则要求考生依据文章的思路自由发挥。 5．续写时使用的时态要与原阅读材料中的时态一致。  佳作构建 【写作步骤】 第一步：仔细审题 速读阅读材料和写作要求，了解文章大意，明确写作任务。 第二步：细读全文 阅读材料一般为记叙文，阅读时要迅速抓住故事的4个关键要素：时间、地点、人物、事件。前三个要素考生易于获取，至于事件，考生必须理清事件的起因和发展过程。用笔在原文中标记能描述事件发展过程或者表明作者态度和观点的关键词(主要是名词、动词、形容词和副词)，以备高效快捷地梳理故事线索。 第三步：精心谋篇 先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据确定好的段落大意，选出每一段可能要用到的原文中带下划线的关键词。结合这些关键词，确定每一段的写作要点。这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数的要求。 第四步：初写成文 按照第三步谋篇时确定好的写作要点进行初次写作。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致。另外，还要注意尽可能地减少表达上的语法错误。如果遇到语言上的表述困难，可多参考原阅读材料中的有关语句。 第五步：润色升级 初写成文后，要对文章进行升级提升，用亮点词汇代替一般词汇，用高级句式代替一般句式。 第六步：复查定稿 完成续写后，考生要根据以下几点做好修改润色。 1．续写部分与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。 2．内容的丰富性。 3．应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。 4．续写部分与原阅读材料在内容上的连贯性与一致性。  典例示范 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A young man was getting ready to graduate from college. For many months he had admired a beautiful sports car in a dealer's showroom, and knowing his father could well afford it, he told him that was all he wanted. As Graduation Day approached, the young man awaited signs that his father had purchased the car. Finally, on the morning of his graduation, his father called him into his private study. His father told him how proud he was to have such a fine son, and told him how much he loved him. He handed his son a beautiful wrapped gift box. Curious, but somewhat disappointed, the young man opened the box and found a lovely, leather­bound Bible, with the young man's name embossed in gold. Angrily, he raised his voice to his father and said, “With all your money you give me a Bible？” He then stormed out of the house, leaving the Bible. Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business. He had a beautiful home and a wonderful family, but realizing his father was very old, he thought perhaps he should go to see him. He had not seen him since that gr