内容正文:
如何介绍自已崇拜的伟人
写作任务
你校英文报“Great People”专栏现在面向全体中学生征文。请你根据所给提示,写一篇英文短文介绍我国著名科学家——钱学森,并向该报刊投稿。
生卒年月
1911.12-2009.10
主要经历及贡献
1. 1934年,毕业于上海交通大学;
2. 1935年,就读于麻省理工学院(Massachusetts Institute of Technology);1936年,进入加州理工学院(California Institute of Technology) 学习,并于1939年获得两个博士学位;
3. 1955年,几经坎坷,返回祖国,毕生致力于科研,被称为“中国航天之父”。
总结
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注意: 1. 词数120左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作要求介绍一位自己崇拜的伟人,属于记叙文。介绍崇拜的伟人关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就,并点明为何使你钦佩。介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主,但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。
二、谋篇布局
针对本篇写作任务,我们可以列出以下提纲:
第一部分:引出所崇拜的人物(钱学森);
第二部分:介绍钱学森的主要经历及贡献;
第三部分:点明其令你钦佩的品质。
三、组织语言
第一部分:引出所崇拜的人物(钱学森)。
普通表达
The person I admire most is ..., a famous / great scientist known as ...
高级表达
My role model is ..., a(n) outstanding / distinguished ( 著名的 ) / talented scientist titled ...
第二部分:介绍钱学森的主要经历及贡献。
普通表达
★... was born in ... and died in ...
★ In 1934, he graduated from ... Then he went off to ... for further study in ... and a year later ..., where he got two doctor's degrees.
★ After he graduated from ..., he studied ... And then he continued his study at ...
★ His deep love for ... made him desire to ... Though meeting many difficulties, he returned to China in ...
★ He put his heart into ... all his life and made great contributions to the development of ...
高级表达
★... was born in ... and passed away in ...
★ Having graduated from ... in 1934, he set out for ... to pursue advanced study in 1935, and a year later ..., where he gained / obtained two doctorates in ...
★ Having graduated from ..., he went off to ..., after which he entered ... for further study.
★ Out of a strong love for ..., he was determined to ... Though encountering many difficulties, eventually he made his return to China with great resolution in ...
★ He devoted himself whole-heartedly to ... during his lifetime, making remarkable achievements in ...
第三部分:点明其令你钦佩的品质。
普通表达
★ I am gr