UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ　Writing——健康报告书（Word教参）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2021-2022学年新教材高中英语必修第一册（人教版）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——健康报告书 本单元的写作任务是写一篇健康报告书。使用恰当的描绘性语言，准确地表达出自己或他人在过去及现在的健康状况。 一、基本框架 二、增分佳句 (一)开头部分：描述过去的状况 1．When I was a little child, I was so weak that I caught a cold now and then. 小时候，我身体很虚弱，时不时会感冒。 2．I was so fat that I often lost my breath after walking for a while. 我太胖了，走一会儿路后常常会喘不过气来。 3．I was so upset that I was every day. to build up my body by 我很沮丧，所以我决定每天锻炼来强身健体。 (二)主体部分： 出现转折， 通过实施某种方法后发生了变化 4．Then I read an article, which said jogging in the morning would . 然后我读了一篇文章，说早上慢跑会有很大作用。 5．So I follow the advice and put it into practice every day. 所以我听从建议，每天把它付诸实践。 6．Now I make it a rule to get up early and jog for about half an hour. 现在我养成了早起慢跑半个小时的习惯。 7．Playing Taichi can not only make us but it can also bring us pleasure. 打太极不仅能让我们保持健康也能带给我们快乐。 8．Running is not only a good way to build up our body but also makes us relaxed.跑步不仅是强身健体的一个好的方式，也有助于我们放松心情。 9．After that, I feel refreshed and energetic. 在那之后，我感到神清气爽，精力充沛。 (三)结尾部分：做出结论 10．At present, I every day, which benefits my daily life greatly. by 目前，我通过每天锻炼保持身体健康，这对我的日常生活有很大的好处。 11．In my opinion, the best way to is that we should have a positive attitude to our life. 在我看来，保持健康的最好方法是我们应该有一个积极的生活态度。 12．As far as I'm concerned, keeping a balanced is of great importance to us. 就我而言，保持均衡的饮食对我们很重要。 【写作要求】 我姐姐一直因为减肥不成功而苦恼，尽管她尝试了很多方法，但都无济于事。后来她遇到了原来很胖的同学，得知她减肥的秘诀就是适当运动和有恒心。在同学的鼓励下，我姐姐终于减肥成功。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加内容。 【五步成文】 第一步：审题谋篇 第二步：推敲词汇 1．lose weight　　　　　　　减肥 2．attend a party 参加聚会 3．join an exercise class 参加健身班 4．work out 锻炼 5．stick to 坚持 6．reach one's goal 达到目标 7．ideal 理想的 8．the secret to ……的秘诀 第三步：由词扩句 1．我姐姐很胖，多年来一直在努力减肥。 My sister was fat and had been trying to lose weight for years. 2．她没有变得苗条，所以她很伤心。 She didn't become slim so that she was sad. 3．当她参加一个聚会时，遇见了她的同学简。 She attended a party. She met her classmate Jane. 4．简原来很胖。 Jane used to be fat. 5．简告诉我姐姐去参加运动班。 Jane told my sister to join an exercise class. 6．她按照简告诉她的，一周锻炼三次。 She worked out three times a week as Jane told her. 7．因为体重减得很