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Unit 1 A new start
表达作文巧升格
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写一篇日记
日记是以记叙一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所思为内容的一种文体。
[基本框架]
1.书端——用于记载写日记的日期、星期和天气情况。它位于正文上面的第一行,顶格写起。日期和星期写在第一行的左上角,天气情况写在第一行的右上角。
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2.主体——交代故事涉及的人物、时间和地点,具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果。
3.结尾——对事件的分析和感受
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[常用词块]
1.later on后来
2.of help/use/value有帮助的/有用的/有价值的
3.realise my dream实现我的梦想
4.enjoy the sights欣赏景观
5.taste the local food品尝当地饭菜
6.be impressed by the royal construction对皇家建筑印象深刻
7.leave a deep impression in my mind在我脑海里留下了深刻印象
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[常用语句]
1.写景
①In the morning,it was very fine! I decided to climb the mountain with my family.
早上,天气很好!我决定和家人一起去爬山。
②The air on the mountain is very fresh.The flowers,plants and trees on the mountains all seem extremely beautiful.
山上的空气很新鲜。山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。
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③You can imagine how charming it used to be:sweet/fresh air,clean water,green grass,swimming fish,flying birds,and the golden sunshine.
你可以想象它过去是多么迷人:新鲜的空气、清澈的水、嫩绿的草、畅游的鱼、飞翔的鸟和金色的阳光。
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2.叙事
①I'm very happy today because it's the first time that I have come to visit...
今天我很高兴,因为这是我第一次来参观……
②Hardly had I stepped out when it began to pour.
我一出门,天就下起了倾盆大雨。
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③Our hometown has changed so greatly that I could hardly recognise it.
我们的家乡变化很大,我几乎认不出来了。
④On the way home,I caught sight of a car knocking into a big truck.
在回家的路上,我看见一辆汽车撞在一辆大卡车上。
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3.感受
①We really had a pleasant time today.
我们今天真的过得很愉快。
②What a significant day I had today!
今天是我意义非凡的一天!
③What happened today has left a deep impression in my mind.
今天发生的事给我留下了深刻的印象。
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根据下列内容,以第一人称形式用英语写一篇日记。
星期一,10月6日下午,风和日丽,我与李红一起走在回家的路上,突然听到呼救声,我们发现一个小女孩在河水中挣扎。李红连衣服都没来得及脱就跳入水中,她艰难地把落水的女孩拖上河岸。平时,李红学习努力,尊敬老师,与同学们相处得不错,总是乐于助人。她为我们树立了好榜样,我们应该向她学习。
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[参考范文]
October 6th,MondaySunny and warm
This afternoon,after school we were on our way home when we suddenly heard a cry for help.We found a little girl struggling in the river.My classmate Li Hong jumped into the water without taking off her clothes.She took great trouble to pull the girl to the bank.With he