Unit 2作文-建议信 学案教师版2021-2022学年高一英语译林版必修第二册

B2U2作文-----如何写建议信 一．写作技巧 一般而言，建议信属于半开放式作文，大多要求考生根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办法或者提出合理的建议，材料多为征求建议的信件。 二．写作要点 1.建议信的内容：作者就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2.建议信的对象：①写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点； ②写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。注意建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。语气和用词要恰当，如果收信人是长者，则宜采用严谨、谦虚、正式的语言；如果对方是亲密的朋友，语言就可以亲切自然一些。 三．文章结构 1.开门见山，点明写信的目的是提建议 2.讲清楚提建议的理由及应采取的具体措施，层次分明。 3.呼应开头，指出所提建议的意义，并发出号召或提出希望，礼貌结束全文。 四．常用素材 1.开头 I’d like to give you some advice on the problem you faced with. I am writing to express my views concerning... It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on... 2.正文 My suggestions are as follows. May I suggest that you... I really hope that... What about...? How about...? If I were you， I would...... It would be better if...... When it comes to such a situation， I would like to suggest that you... 3.结束语 If you could take what I suggest seriously， you would If you can take my suggestions into consideration， ... I hope they will be helpful. I hope you will find these proposals/ideas helpful/useful. 五．写作模板 Dear _____, I’m sorry to hear that_______________________________(问题) .Here are my suggestions for you to solve the problem. For one thing， I think it would be more beneficial if you __________________________________ (建议一) . For another， if I were you， I would(建议二)_________________________________________________. What's more (建议三)____________________________________________. I hope that my suggestions are practical for you. Yours， 6． 典例导悟 (2020·寿光市上学期期末考试)假如你是李华，你的英国好友Tom请你帮忙买一只风筝，作为生日礼物送给妹妹。请你给Tom写一封回信， 比较已物色好的两种风筝，并提出你的购买建议和理由。 风筝特性 A B 形状 鹰状 蝴蝶状 材质 塑料 布 尺寸 1.6*0.9m 1.1*0.6m 价格 80元 100元 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom， Having known that you intend to give your sister a kite as a birthday gift， I am writing to introduce two types of kites I’ve chosen for you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________