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写一篇描写体育运动比赛类文章
[写作指导]
描写体育运动比赛类文章属于记叙文的范畴。文章要将自已所看到的场面按比赛前、比赛中和比赛后的顺序进行写作,结尾要写出自己的感受。
◆[审题谋篇]
体裁:记叙文
时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
人称:第一人称
◆[文章构架]
开头段:介绍比赛项目,举行的时间、地点,参与人物
主体段:详细介绍比赛过程
结尾段:抒发自己的感受
◆[词句积累]
1.亮点词汇
①yelling for...为……呐喊
②catch up with other athletes 赶上其他运动员
③get to the final line 到达终点线
④chase one another 相互追逐
⑤an exciting experience 激动人心的经历
⑥feel proud of our classmates
为我们同学感到自豪
⑦go wild 疯狂
⑧win the gold medal 获得金牌
2.经典句式
①I watched the final of the 4×100metre relay at our sports meeting held on Monday.
我观看了周一举行的运动会上的4×100米接力赛决赛。
②A sports meeting was held in my school on September 15th.Some joined in the competitions while some just watched them.
9月15日我校举行了一场运动会。有些人参加了比赛,有些人只是观看了比赛。
③It was an exciting experience which I would never forget.
这是一次激动人心、令我难以忘怀的经历。
④It is one of the forgettable moments that I have ever experienced.
这是我所经历过的难以忘记的时刻之一。
⑤What impressed me most is...
让我印象最深刻的是……
⑥ Before the race,every competitor was quiet and still.I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense.
比赛前,每位选手都保持安静、静止不动。我从未想到体育赛事的气氛会如此紧张。
⑦He stood at the start line,looking relaxed and confident.
他站在起跑线上,看上去轻松、自信。
⑧When the runners set off, everyone went wild!
当赛跑运动员们开始起跑,人们都疯狂起来!
⑨I learned that we should insist on everything in our life.
我学会了我们在生活中对任何事情都应该坚持。
⑩ It was an unforgettable experience which I will remember forever.
这是我会永远记住的难忘的经历。
⑪And the match is the best way to make people happier,stronger,and also make them become more friendly.
比赛是让人们更高兴、更强壮的最好方式,也使得他们变得更加友好。
[典题示例]
假如你是《中国日报》的兼职小记者,2022 奥运会组委公布了奥运火炬传递的路线,请根据以下内容。为这一事进行报道。
基本情况:10 月 1号,组委会将公布奥运火炬传递路线。
火炬传递者:大多数是普通群众,但也有可能有公众人的,如运动员代表、十大感动中国人物、各界精英等。
详情:途径多个著名景点,覆盖 10 多个大城市;全国人民都能在电视上观看现场直播;届时将召集有能力的热心志愿者开展系列服务工作。
参考词汇:组委会:Organizing Committee of the Olympics;火炬传递:Torch Relay;十大感动中国人物:the Top Ten people moving China
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
◆[要点词汇]
1.申请 apply
2.做广告;广告 advertise
3.环境的 environmental
4.栖息地;生活地 habitat
5.合作 team up with
◆[完成句子]
1.火炬传递将要途经中国的一些著名景点。
The Olympic Torch will visit some of wellknown tourist spots in China .
2.它将覆盖十多个大城市。
It will cover more than 10 big cities .
3.国内外观众都能观看现场直播。
The event by most of Chinese will be watched live by audiences in and overseas.
4.激动人心的火炬传递由来自各行各业的著名人士进行。
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by famous people from every field .
5.还有优秀的教练团队和运动员等。
The conductors include excellent staff from teaching,athletes,and so on .
6.除此之外,我们还需要许多热心的优秀的志愿者。
Furthermore, we will need amounts of enthusiastic and capable volunteers then .
◆[句式升级]
7.使用复合句和分词将句1、2、3合并为一句
The Olympic Torch will visit some of wellknown tourist spots in China, covering more than 10 big cities, which will be watched live by most of Chinese audiences in and overseas.
8.将句4、5合为复合句
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by famous people from every field,including excellent staff from teaching, athletes,and so on.
9.使用被动语态改写句6,使之更加简洁。
Furthermore, amounts of enthusiastic and capable volunteers will be needed then.
◆[连句成篇]
◆[参考范文]
Good morning dear viewers!
As is reported, the Organizing Committee of the 2022 Olympic in Peking released the route of the Torch Relay on October lst.The Olympic Torch will visit some of wellknown tourist spots in China, covering more than 10 big cities,which will be watched live by most of Chinese audiences in and overseas.
The exciting Torch Relay will be conducted by famous people from every field, including excellent staff from teaching, athletes,and so on.It's amazing that some of the Top Ten people