Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 单元写作研读 写一篇描述经历的记叙文-2021-2022学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册【创新教程】五维课堂同步教师用书（外研版）
写一篇描述经历的记叙文
[写作指导]
记叙文书面表达要求学生根据写作材料中所列举的要点提示，写一篇短文。话题类作文的要点提示简单，涉及面广，各个要点之间既有相互独立性又有相互之间内在的连贯性；有相关写作的要求和说明。对于话题类作文，要做好谋篇布局，必须要准确审题，理顺关系，突出要点。
记叙文文体的写作一般有两种形式：提纲作文和图画作文。记叙文书面表达有以下特点：
(1)题材以书信、报道、启事、日记、介绍、欢迎词等为主要形式；
(2)体裁广泛，记叙文、说明文、夹叙夹议文、议论文等各种文体都有所涵盖；
(3)内容贴近学生生活。
◆[审题谋篇]
体裁：记叙文
时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
人称：第一人称
◆[文章构架]
首段：引出话题
主体：讲述过程
结尾：说明结果或发表感慨
◆[词句积累]
1．亮点词汇
①experience n．&v.经历
②cheer v．&n.欢呼；喝彩
③determined adj.坚决的；有决心的
④enthusiastic adj.热情的，热心的
⑤gradual adj.逐渐的；逐步的
⑥memorable adj.难忘的
⑦refresh v．(使)精神振作；(使)精力恢复
⑧departure n．启程；离开
2．经典句式
①We were having dinner when the lights went out.
我们正在吃饭，突然灯熄灭了。
②On seeing her mother, the little girl burst out crying.
一看到她的妈妈，这个小女孩便嚎啕大哭。
③Without hesitation/ Without a word，we went up to her and helped her back on her feet.
我们毫不犹豫地走过去把她扶了起来。
④After that we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.
之后，我们会在护士的帮助下为他们做一些清洁和清洗工作。
⑤Finally we may also give them some performances: singing，dancing，and so on.最后，我们也可以给他们做一些表演如唱歌、跳舞等。
⑥Some students will do the cleaning，some students will chat with the elder；and the others will prepare the dinner.
一些学生将打扫卫生，一些学生将与老人聊天，其他人将准备晚餐。
⑦What delighted us most was that the little girl stopped crying.
最使我们高兴的是那个小女孩不哭了。
⑧Tired as we were，we learned what we could not learn at school.
虽然我们很累，但我们学到了我们在学校学不到的东西。
[典题示例]
假定你是李华，曾经在一所聋哑学校做过助教，请根据以下要点用英文写一篇关于你的助教经历。
1．一位失去生活信心的失聪女孩Jean在你的帮助下重拾生活信心；
2．当时你遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍；
3．你是如何克服困难的并学到了什么。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
◆[要点词汇]
1． embarrassed adj.难堪的，尴尬的
2． delightful adj.令人愉快的，讨人喜欢的
3． companionship n．友谊；友好交往
4． upset adj.心烦意乱的，烦恼的
5． nevertheless adv.然而，不过
6． persevere v．锲而不舍，坚持不懈
◆[完成句子]
1．总之，帮助Jean重拾生活信心是一次愉快的经历。
On the whole， helping Jean restore her confidence in life is a delightful experience .
2．我面对的最大的困难是沟通障碍。
The biggest difficulty I faced was the communication barriers.
3．此外，我尽一切努力与她建立友谊及互相的信任。
Furthermore，I make every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her.
◆[句式升级]
4．用it作形式主语改写句1
On the whole，it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life .
5．将句2改为强调句
It was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced.
◆[连句成篇]
◆[参考范文]
On the whole，it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life.
From my memory, the first time that we should meet, she was always upset，making me embarrassed.Meanwhile，it was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced.Nevertheless，I made it.First，I advised her to gather courage to confront the difficulties instead of escaping from them.Furthermore，I make every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her.Eventually, what matters most is to persevere in what I am doing.
Fortunately，what I got from this experience is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that everyone should be confident about life.
Ⅰ.单词集训
A．词形转化
1．Pat refused to give her any information (inform) about Sarah.
2．He hardly ever washes the dishes and he rarely (rare), if ever, does any cleaning.
3．I was delighted (delight) at the news of her wedding.
4．The whole playground was excited with the audience cheering enthusiastically (enthusiastic) for the athletes.
5．If I am lucky enough to win the election (elect), the first thing I will do is enrich our students' afterclass activities.
6．I wrote him a letter to show my appreciation (appreciate) of his thoughtfulness.