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Life is all about making choices.
How to choose a right college?
It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus (校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.
It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply
reason
do all the research you can to
make sure you are making the right one.
“ to support the point ”
“ to lead in the topic
sentence”
Q1: Visiting the college in person or online, which one is better?
?
Point 1: It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply.
Topic sentence: Do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right decision.
Point 1: It’s suggested that you visit the colleges you want to attend before your application.
Topic sentence: Doing all the research can help you make a right decision.
Main idea
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There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that won't be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!
There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local
reason
if you live nearby, go
check it out!
“ to support the point ”
“ to address the point again”
area.
Q2: Is it necessary to visit all ideal colleges despite the distance?
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Point 2: It's a must to visit the local colleges.
Point 2: There's no excuse