第6讲 初中写作综合能力提升【教案】-【培训机构专用】2021-2022学年小升初英语分班考试培优讲义（上海通用）

2021－2022学年小升初英语分班考试培优讲义 第6讲-初中写作综合能力提升-教案 教学内容 课堂导入 教学建议：1.老师让学生介绍图中人物，记录下描写人物的词语，看哪位同学描述的更加准确详细； 2.根据图片中度假方式，描述图中人物的活动，并让学生分析假日的计划。 Part 1: Choose one of the pictures and try to describe the appearance of the person. Part 2: What kind of activitiy do you like? What do you do during your holiday? 精讲精练 教学建议： 此部分60分钟，建议老师带着学生梳理下每种作文的特点，结合例题精讲分析写作思路，积累相关写作的词汇及句型，并在课上让学生练习，结合学生的范文进行点评讲解。 知识名称：写作 【知识梳理1】人物类写作 ( 人物类写作属于记叙描写类，在写作时要注重描写出人物的外貌特征、性格特征，以及通过事例突出表现出一个人的性格，并描写出你对此人的看法。 外貌类词语积累： good-looking, pretty, beautiful, lovely, medium height, of average height, well-built, overweight, slim, middle-aged, very fit, long wavy black hair, wear glasses,always smile 性格类词语积累： brave,self-confident,honest,patient,easy-going,out-going,energetic,forgetful, generous,talented,hard-working,helpful,selfless ,humourous,optimistic ) 【例题精讲】 My favourite teacher Write at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite teacher”(以“我最喜欢的老师”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 写作分析 ( 记叙文，但除了写出 老师 的特点之外还要适当说明你对他的看法。 按照逻辑顺序写作： 老师 基本情况－特点－你的看法 注意总结要带有抒情内容。 ) ( 思路梳理 ： 提问自己：我 老师 是个怎样的人？ 提问自己：我为什么觉得他是这样的呢，发生过什么？ ) 写作练习 Everyone has his or her favourite teacher, so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss Li, our English teacher. Miss Li is beautiful. She has big eyes and curly hair. She wears glasses. Most of all, I like her because she is very kind to us. Three years ago, when I started at my school. I found English very difficult. At first, Miss Li seemed very strict. But she asked students having difficulties in English to go to her office, then she helped them in person. Little by little, I began to see she is very kind and patient. She explains everything to us until we understand it. She tells us not to worry and never to give up. With the help of her, I have made great progress over the last three years. Time flies! I’m going to graduate soon and I really want to say, “Thank you, my teacher.” 【巩固练习】 My mother Write at least 50 words