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第十七讲 写作强化训练
说明文
技法指导
写有关健康生活习惯的说明文时,一般要写明什么样的做法会对健康有利或有害,人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。该类文章一般采用以下写作策略:
1.开门见山提出主题,说明自己所发现的关于健康问题的现象。
2.分析所给内容,然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容时可以先说现象,也可以先说结果,再说引起这种结果的原因。
3.最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一部分的内容主要是提出解决办法及给出自己的保持健康的建议。
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①As far as I am concerned, I hate the terrible dirt and noise in the city. If given the chance, I would prefer to live peacefully in the country.
就我而言,我讨厌城市里的尘土和噪音。 如果有机会,我宁愿在乡村过一种宁静的生活。
②Taking exercise can not only strengthen your body but also release you from stress.
做运动不仅能帮助你增强体魄还能让你从压力中释放出来。
③Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.
早睡早起身体好。早睡早起身体好。
④It is widely believed that ambitious people are likely to succeed because they have the internal motivation to achieve their goals.
人们普遍认为,有志向的人可能会成功,因为他们有实现目标的内在动力。
⑤People are beginning to watch their words in public.
人们开始关注他们的公开言论。
⑥I say we should reject that little game of who's busier than whom.
要我说,我们应该拒绝这种谁比谁更忙碌的小游戏。
⑦Doctors advise eating more fruits and vegetables.
医生建议多吃水果和蔬菜。
⑧Rivers