内容正文:
2021年英语中考作文写作指导
作文的评判标准
9-10分 完全符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。句式多样,词汇丰富。语言准确,语意连贯,具有逻辑性。
慎给10分。(有2处以上语法错的不给满分。)
6-8分 完全符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯,表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。
4-5分 部分内容符合题目要求,要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言不通顺,表达不够清楚,影响整体理解。
0-3分 与题目有关内容不多,只是简单拼凑提示词语,所写内容难以理解。
满分作文标准
完全符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。
句式多样,词汇丰富。
语言准确
语意连贯,具有逻辑性。
全 Complete
顺 Logical
准 Accurate
富 Rich
书写美观
美 Enjoyable
CLEAR原则
作文二
成长不是一帆风顺的。在人生的道路上,任何人都会遇到困难和挫折,就看你是否能战胜它?战胜了,你就是生活的强者。某英文网站正在开展以“成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你的成长故事。内容包括:你曾经遇到的困难,克服困难的过程,以及你的收获。
提示词:be afraid of, communicate, more confident
提示问题:
● What difficulty did you use to have in your school life?
● How did you deal with it?
● What have you learned from it?
全 Complete
完全符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。
审题
立意
人称,时态,
要点。
正向、积极
符合新时态中学生的身份
作文二
成长不是一帆风顺的。在人生的道路上,任何人都会遇到困难和挫折,就看你是否能战胜它?战胜了,你就是生活的强者。某英文网站正在开展以“成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你的成长故事。内容包括:你曾经遇到的困难,克服困难的过程,以及你的收获。
提示词:be afraid of, communicate, more confident
提示问题:
● What difficulty did you use to have in your school life?
● How did you deal with it?
● What have you learned from it?
人称:
一般过去时
I
时态:
要点:
现在完成时
What difficulty did you use to have in your school life?
difficulty
Brainstorming
study
huamn communication
...
sports
What difficulty did you use to have in your school life?
I uesd to have difficulty in making friends with others.
supporting sentence
I was quiet and shy. So I never had a friend and always feel lonely.
How did you deal with it?
I did a lot of things to deal with my difficulty.
Topic sentence
Supporting Sentence
First of all,
What's more,
Finally,
took part in activities
spoke in front of others
tried to be positive and helpful
深化
目的和结果
What have you learned from it?
I have learned a lot from dealing with my difficulty.
Topic sentence
Supporting Sentence
not only...,but also...
every one is unique and believe yourself
On one hand...,On the other hand...
have the courage to make a change
On one hand,
On the other hand,
顺 Logical
语意连贯,具有逻辑性。
First o