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短文改错汇编
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第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
51. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm gladly to hear that you will come back to our homeland for development. I think it's great idea to build our hometown. As we all know, great changes had taken place in our home town over the last few years . The streets and roads what used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalk. More and more tall buildings are being built. Therefore, during the course of creating a more modern city, some problems appear, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. Our city government has realized these problems and has taken on measures to solve it. I think everyone should make efforts to make our country more beautiful.
I wish you will make great contributions for our hometown after you come back.
【答案】1. gladly→glad 2.great前加a 3. had→have 4. what→that/which 5. sidewalk→sidewalks 6. Therefore→However 7. 删掉on 8. it→them 9. will →would 10. for→to
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文。信中,作者表达了希望对方回到家乡,给家乡做出巨大贡献的愿望。
【详解】1.考查形容词。句意:我很高兴听到你将回到我们的祖国发展。分析可知此处用形容词词作I'm的表语,故将gladly改为glad。
2.考查不定冠词。句意:我认为建设我们的家乡是个好主意。idea为可数名词,前面应添加不定代词,表泛指,且放在定语great之前。故在great前加a。
3.考查时态。句意:众所周知,在过去的几年里,我们的家乡发生了巨大的变化。由over the last few years这一表示时间的短语可知,应使用现在完成时,表示从过去某个时间点持续到现在的动作,故将had改为have。
4.考查定语从句引导词。句意:过去狭窄的街道现在更宽更干净了,人行道上长满了花草树木。分析可知此处用引导词that/which引导定语从句,修饰先行词the streets and roads,指物,并在从句中作主语,what不可引导定语从句,故将what改为that/which。
5.考查复数。句意:过去狭窄的街道现在更宽更干净了,人行道上长满了花草树木。sidewalk(人行道)是可数名词,分析可知应使用复数形式。故将sidewalk改为sidewalks。
6.考查副词。句意:然而,在建设现代化城市的过程中,出现了水污染、空气污染、交通拥挤等问题。分析可知,前文表述家乡发生的巨大变化,后文在建设过程中出现的问题。前后应该是转折关系,应使用转折连词however,开头首字母大写。故将Therefore改为However。
7.考查固定短语。句意:我市政府已经认识到这些问题,并采取了相应的措施来解决。take measures为固定短语,中间不