第3部分 概要写作02 导入训练-【快捷英语】高一年级高考热点题型（应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作）

○高考热点题型应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作高一年级 思路点拨 1.这是一篇议论文的概要写作。首先,通过阅读本文的材料可知,第一段提出了作者的论点:虽然我 们经常认为金钱会给我们带来幸福,但是我们并不满足,因为我们爱好太少。作者在第二段中把我们的 生活比喻成一个大厦,我们的每个爱好就是大厦中的一个房间。作者在第三段主要介绍了我们一生中应 该从以下几个方面充实自己的生活大厦:艺术、文学、音乐和体育。最后一段进行了总结性概括。 2.写概要的时候,一定要注意把论点和作者提岀的几个论据概括到自已的概要中,同时,注意语言 的准确性和概括性。 【学生习作】 People think more money means happiness, and actually a lack of desires and interest makes them happy. (#A 1)Art, literature, music and sports are real something that add happiness to your life, making you a real rich person. ( #. 2)Every new taste, every fresh enthusiasm adds a room to your house of life. (45 3)Whatever rooms your house of life has, the secret of enjoying life is to keep adding more to it. (# R 4) 【习作评析】 本篇概要基本上概括了全文的中心内容,对原文的主要信息进行了综合提炼。同时,也使用了一些 较为高级的词汇和复杂的句型等。美中不足的是: 1.有个别内容使用了原文的句子,如 Every new taste, every fresh enthusiasm adds a room to your house 2.文章中有一些语法方面的错误,如第二句话中的rea应改为 really,add应改为ads 3.个别过渡词使用错误,如第一句话中的and应改为but 【满分习作】 People add more money and things to their happiness, but some of them are unsatisfied because they lack desires and additional interests. (#H 1)Art, literature, music and sports are several necessary rooms in the house of life which can lead to real riches. H 2) No matter what rooms the house of life contains, the key to enjoying life is to maintain adding spiritual wealth to the house of life. (#R 3) 【满分评析】 1.本篇概要用自己的语言转述了文章的核心内容,不仅要点齐全,而且浓缩了原文的材料,包括文 章的主题思想:钱并不意味着幸福,艺术、文学、音乐以及体育等兴趣爱好才是生活的意义。同时,根据 概要的需要,重建了文章的内容和顺序。概要中剔除了重复的信息点和一些具体的细节内容。 2.本篇概要还使用了高级词汇,如lack、ad、 lead to、 the key to、 spiritual等,同时还使用了复杂 句型,如 because引导的原因状语从句、 which引导的定语从句、 no matter what引导的让步状语从句等。 Passage 2 ◎题材:人物故事体裁:记叙文词数:370难度:ll建议用时:20分钟 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 On a bright Friday afternoon in spring, Sumeja Tulic had every reason to relish walking on the streets of New York, a city she'd moved to nine months earlier from London to attend a journalism school At the City Hall station, she settled onto a bench. It was just after 2 pm. Only a few people were at the station A