第1部分 应用文写作02 导入训练-【快捷英语】高一年级高考热点题型（应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作）

第一部分应用文写作 注意 1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数); 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 Notice An exciting English speech contest"Words That Mean the Most is around the corner Come on, boys and girls he student unic 【写作指导 审题构思: 1.确定写作要求:书面通知写作,注意书面通知的语言和格式; 2.确定时态和人称:以一般将来时为主,人称为第三人称 3.确定内容要点:比赛形式、地点、日期、联系人和联系电话; 4.确定文章结构:标题、内容、落款 【学生习作】 Notice An exciting English speech contest"Words That Mean the Most is around the corner! The speakers have to make a speech for 8 to 10 minutes. After that, they will be judged by answering 3 to 5 questions. The contest will fall on May 10 in the school gym. If you want to take part in it, please go to the Student Union Office before April 30 to sign up Call Li Hua at 0766-822-5166 Don't miss the opportunity to show your talent Come on, boys and girls! The Student Union 【习作评析】 本文基本上围绕写作要求和要点进行写作。各个要点叙述全面,过渡自然。 1.从语篇结构看,格式正确。分段落分别叙述,层次分明。 2.从语言和词汇方面看,灵活地运用了一些较高级词汇,如 fall on、 sign up和 opportuni!y等。 3.文中不足之处在于:个别语句,如 The speakers have to make a speech for8to10 minutes.和Don' t miss the opportunity to show your talent,语气生硬,命令性强,与通知的号召性矛盾。 4.另外,文章中的句子 After that, they will be judged by answering3to5 questions中的 judged用词不妥。 ○高考热点题型应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作高一年级 【满分习作】 Notice An exciting English speech contest"Words That Mean the Most"is around the corner! Every one of Senior I is expected to take part in the contest Each student who enters the contest will be given eight to ten minutes to deliver his or her speech, followed by a three to five minutes'question-answering period It will be held in the school gym on the afternoon of May 10. And after that, there will be a prize-giving ceremony Looking forward to it? Go to the Student Union Office and enter your name before april 30. Call Li Hua at 0766-822-5166 if you have any questions Come on, boys and girls The Student union 【满分评析 1.文章结构完整,主要分为以下几个部分:第一部分总体介绍了通知的内容,第二部分介绍了这次比 赛的细节信息,第三部分主要介绍了报名方式 2.在写作中使用了较多的高级词汇,如 take part in、 deliver one' s speech等,尤其使用了熟词生义的 enter一词,突显了作者对词汇内涵的熟悉程度 3.遣词造句优雅,行文流畅,高级句型使用恰当。who引导的定语从句、过去分词短语