3高频话题写作一 学校与学校生活（课件PPT）-2021吉林中考英语【智乐星中考-命题研究】精讲本

精讲本 2021吉林 英语 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 高频话题写作一　学校与学校生活 学校与学校生活这一话题为常考话题，通常有以下命题角度：谈论学生在学校的学习与生活、谈论校园活动、给新生提出一些关于校园生活的建议。针对这一话题，要求学生能够对自己的校园或者理想中的校园进行描述，并且能够描述自己的校园生活。2018年吉林以After­school activities make my life colorful为题来考查校园活动的好处。 (2018·吉林中考)文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以 “After­school activities make my life colorful” 为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。 内容包括：1.你所参加的1～2项课外活动； 2．课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。 写作要求：1.词数80～100词； 2．文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 命题研究 After­school activities make my life colorful Nowadays, after­school activities are becoming more and more popular. There are many different kinds of activities. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, I’ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future. All in all, after­school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 命题研究 【存在问题】 1．句式过于单一，平淡无奇； 2．文章没有高级词汇，整体没有亮点。 命题研究 【范文升格】 After­school activities make my life colorful Nowadays, after­school activities are becoming more and more popular. There are many different kinds of activities, ①such as arts and sports. ②I like play volleyball, so I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, I’ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball, ③which is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future. All in all, after­school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 命题研究 ①通过列举一系列的校园活动，使文章更丰富； ②陈述加入俱乐部的原因，使句子之间的衔接更加通顺连贯； ③用引导词which进行升格，体现扎实的语言基础。 命题研究 “六步法”突破高分作文 一审——审要点：细审题目隐