11高频话题写作五 经历及感受（课件PPT）-2021吉林中考英语【智乐星中考-命题研究】精讲本

精讲本 2021吉林 英语 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 高频话题写作五　经历及感受 本话题主要是围绕过去发生的事情或者故事而展开的。写作内容主要涉及日常作息、课外活动、体育比赛、同学交往、娱乐等日常活动中的所见所闻所感，主要描写所经历的事情、活动的内容、比赛的过程与结果，以及自己对事件的看法和评价等。 此类作文通常以要点提示、表格提示等方式来考查，且文体为记叙文或应用文。针对这一话题，考生应具备描述自己或他人的经历并谈论对这些经历的感受的能力。中考对这一写作话题的考查主要有以下两个角度：1.描述自己的经历及感受； 2.描述他人的经历并谈谈自己的感受。2015年山东吉林中考以The story of my progress为主题考查介绍自己成长进步的经历及感受。 命题研究 (2015·吉林中考)回顾三年的初中生活，父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长，使你进步。那些发生在你与父母之间的故事，看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏。请以The story of my progress为题，写一篇文章。 要求：1.讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情，可适度发挥； 2．词数80～100词，文中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。 命题研究 The story of my progress _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 命题研究 The story of my progress My mother helped me a lot. Three years ago, I was a shy girl. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, my mother heard that a Chinese speech competition would be held in my school and she encouraged me to take part in the activity. At first, I was shocked by her advice. I didn’t want to let her down. I agreed. During that period, my mother often took me to the park to practice. I still remember that day when I heard I won the first prize, my mother smiled happily. 命题研究 Now I am an outgoing and confident girl. My mother’s encouragement and company helped me make such great progress. 命题研究 【存在问题】 1．语法结构单调，词汇简单，平淡无奇。 2．句子缺乏衔接词，语言不连贯。 命题研究 【范文升格】 The story of my progress My progress ①connected with my mother. Three years ago, I was a shy girl. I was afraid to speak in public. My mother ②was worried about that. One day, my mother heard that a Chinese speech competition would be held in my school and she encouraged me to take part in the activity. ③Though at first I was shocked by