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高频话题写作四 人物介绍
人物介绍话题作文通常分为介绍自己和介绍他人,此类话题作文的命制通常与特定主题相结合。此类作文在描写上侧重写人与叙事相结合,突出主题,主要从外貌介绍、性格特点及优秀品质、主要事例三方面展开。
通常以要点提示、表格提示等方式来考查,且文体为记叙文。针对这一话题,考生应具备介绍人物基本信息(外貌、性格、爱好等)及其经历的能力。2019年吉林中考以介绍个人情况的申请邮件为话题来考查介绍自己。
命题研究
(2019·吉林中考)假如你是李华,想参加China Daily举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。
内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好;
2.梦想职业与个人计划。
写作要求:1.词数80~100词,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
命题研究
Dear Mr.Smith,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Mr.Smith,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua. I like reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school. And I have a habit of keeping a diary. I want to be a writer when I grow up. So after knowing your summer camp, I feel very excited because it’s about dream job experience.After work,I will spend more time making a summary.
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
命题研究
【存在问题】
1.句式过于单一,平淡无奇。
2.文章较短,语言叙述缺乏层次感。
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【范文升格】
Dear Mr.Smith,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
I am Li Hua ①who likes reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school. And I have a habit of keeping a diary. When I grow up, I want to be a writer. ②Because I can write down my thoughts and feelings in words. After knowing your summer camp,I feel very excited since it’s about dream job experience. ③If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance.After work,I will spend more time m