内容正文:
Unit 1 What's the matter?
八年级下册英语(人教版)
单元写作专题—Section B (3a3b)
本单元以“健康和事故”为话题,谈论了自己的健康状况,发生事故时怎么做及如何向他人提出建议和劝告,从而养成良好的饮食和生活习惯。要求同学们熟悉人体部位的英文表达,掌握描述身体不适的表达, 并提出正确的建议。围绕该话题常见的命题形式有: 根据所给提示进行作文。
常用句型:
①I got a stomachache.I almost couldn't get myself out of bed this morning.
②I talked too much yesterday and didn't drink enough water.I have a very sore throat now.
③You should take your temperature.
④You should drink some hot tea with honey.
⑤You should lie down and rest.
⑥I cut myself by accident.
⑦You should put some medicine on it.
⑧If your head and neck still hurt tomorrow,then go to a doctor.
⑨I washed the cut and put some medicine on it.Then I put a bandage on it.
近年来,中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。
要求:1.内容包括:(1)列举中小学生面临的健康问题;
(2)请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
2.词数:60—80;
3.短文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名和地名。
【佳作赏析】
Nowadays,many students in China are unhealthy.They have health problems such as getting fatter or thinner and lacking enough sleep and so on.①But how to keep fit?Here's some advice.
We had better not eat junk food.Eating more fruit and vegetables is good for our health.②I think it's necessary to take exercise for over an hour every day.③On the one hand,having a good lifestyle is very important.For example,we must have at least 8 hours' sleep every day.On the other hand,we need to be in a good mood.④
【名师点评】此处作者列举了中小学生面临的一些健康问题。such as,and so on的运用得当,增强了文章的可读性。此处作者写饮食方面的建议, 并运用了had better not do sth.和动名词短语作主语以及短语be good for,体现了作者灵活运用语言的能力。此处作者写锻炼的必要性。运用了宾语从句,在从句中,运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式短语作真正主语的句型,增强了文章的色彩。此处从两个方面谈保持健康的建议:好的生活方式和好的情绪。过渡词运用恰当,短语on the one hand…on the other hand…for example,at least等运用得很出色,体现了作者深厚的语言功底。
Jack 最近身体不太舒服,经常头疼发烧,并感觉身体虚弱疲劳。看过医生后,他收到了一张诊断表,请根据以下提示写一篇80 词左右的短文。
Jack is not feeling well these days. He often has a headache or has a fever. And he is feeling weak and tired. So he went to a doctor.
The doctor said Jack had a bad cold. He should take some medicine twice a day and have a good rest. Of course, he should have a healthy lifestyle. For example, he should