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2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析(一)08
提纲类应用文40篇(八)
1.(2020·广州市·广东实验中学高三月考)假定你是李华,你的美国网友Peter知道越来越多的人在学汉语,他也想学,但他不了解汉语学习的情况,请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 学习汉语的建议;
2. 你能提供的帮助。
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to talk about Chinese with you. As you know, more and more people in the world are learning Chinese and you are interested in it too. In my opinion, if you want to learn Chinese well, you would practice more spoken Chinese every day just like English. And you can also watch Chinese movies and listen to Chinese songs. You must keep on, which is important for success.
Besides, the best way to learn Chinese is to come to China, and we can chat in Chinese, and sometimes in English.
I'm looking forward to your coming to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给想学汉语但不了解汉语学习的情况的美国网友Peter,向他提供一些学习汉语的建议及你的帮助。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 学习汉语的建议;
2. 你能提供的帮助。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be glad to do sth.;be interested in sth.;listen to sth.;keep on;look forward to sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm very glad to talk about Chinese with you.
2. more and more people in the world are learning Chinese so that you are interested in it too.
3. And you can also watch Chinese movies and listen to Chinese songs.
4. You must keep on,
5. I'm looking forward to your coming to China.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
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