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2021年高考英语【热点·重点·难点】专练(浙江专用)
热点03 读后续写之语言锤炼
【命题趋势回顾】
新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化,其中英语写作分为两部分:第一节为应用文写作;
第二节为读后续写或概要写作。
应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大,已为广大师生所熟悉,但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型
1.题型介绍选材特点
(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;
(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;
(2)内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;
(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
【满分技巧说明】
(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右(词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分);
(2)应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
(3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
(4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
读后续写以读为辅,以写为主,其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力,主要包含以下四个方面:
1. 把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力;
2. 语言运用的准确性和丰富性;
3. 对语篇结构的把握能力;
4. 创造性思维能力。
【续写难点之语言锤炼】
1.思维路径1:替换常用简单词
(1)动词升级
简单词汇
高级词汇
say, believe,
think
figure, hold the view that, assume that, I am convinced that
improve
promote, enhance, strengthen
never give up
stick to it, insist on doing, persist in, adhere to
should
be supposed to do, It is wise/sensible/ makes sense to do, nothing could be better than. . . , It’s worthwhile to do, deserve doing, find it rewarding and enjoyable to do. . .
like
have a passion for, be fond of, fall in love with, have an affection for
come
approach, around the corner, up-coming
make
enable, allow
thank
appreciate, be grateful to, convey my heartfelt
help
do sb. a favor, go/come to one’s aid, with the assistance of, give sb. a hand
use
gain access to, be accessible to
(2)形容词、副词、介词升级
简单词汇
高级词汇
more and
more popular
increasingly popular
big
enormous, tremendous
very
extremely, remarkably, overwhelmingly, pretty, perfectly
famous
accomplished, have a high reputation, distinguished
good
amazing, unbelievable, incredible
bad
disgusting, awful, terrible
important
significant, vital, essential, fundamental, crucial
all kinds of
a variety of, various, diverse
about
concerning, relevant, related
[经典示例]
①On the one hand, too much praise might lead to children’s lack of enthusiasm to explore new things, for they are afraid they won’t meet parents’ expectati