10 高频话题写作三2021重庆中考英语-【智乐星中考·命题研究】精讲本（仁爱版）

精讲本 2021重庆 英语 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 高频话题写作三　兴趣爱好 兴趣与爱好是个人生活的重要组成部分。健康的个人兴趣与爱好促进社会的和谐发展。个人兴趣与爱好话题广泛，如集邮、音乐、运动、收藏等。结合全国近年与此话题相关的书面表达可知，通常有以下命题角度：谈论自己的兴趣爱好；就某一兴趣爱好发表自己的观点。2014年山东淄博中考考查向友好学校的师生介绍自己的兴趣和爱好。 假设你们学校在澳大利亚的友好学校的师生想要了解你校学生的兴趣和爱好，请你写一篇词数不少于80的英语短文，介绍一下你的兴趣和爱好及其意义。 注意：文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名。 命题研究 _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ 命题研究 My hobby is collecting stamps. I have been collecting stamps for 10 years. Usually I collect stamps in three ways. When I get letters, I cut the stamps off the envelops; every year I go to post offices to buy a set of new stamps and I go to the stamp market to buy old stamps and foreign stamps; I have lots of friends who have the same hobby as I. I sometimes exchange my stamps with them. 命题研究 I think my hobby is very interesting. It helps me learn different cultures, including history and international knowledge. I can enjoy the beauty of art. By exchanging stamps, I have made more friends. It’s a way of saving money. The stamps will be more valuable as the time passes by. Hobbies make our life more colorful. 命题研究 【存在问题】 1．句子简单，衔接词较少，文章不连贯。 2．文章在给原因时只是一条条罗列，导致层次不清晰。 3．文章收尾平淡无奇，没有亮点。 命题研究 【范文升格】 My hobby is collecting stamps. I have been collecting stamps for 10 years. Usually I collect stamps in three ways. When I get letters, I cut the stamps off the envelops; every year I go to post offices to buy a set of new stamps and I ①also go to the