12 高频话题写作四-2021重庆中考英语【智乐星中考·命题研究】精讲本（仁爱版）

精讲本 2021重庆 英语 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 高频话题写作四　健康与安全 命题者一般会围绕考生熟悉的安全问题进行设题。写作内容主要涉及基本的健康和安全常识，并对健康和安全问题提出合理的意见或建议。此类书面表达通常以要点提示、表格提示等方式来考查，且文体为议论文。 此话题通常有以下命题角度：谈论健康饮食以及如何保持健康、如何保证自身的安全、关注健康，浅谈自己的看法与做法。2019年安徽中考考查如何保护视力。 命题研究 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下： 1．经常做户外活动； 2．很少用电子产品； 3．坚持做眼保健操； 4．…… 命题研究 注意： 1．词数80～120； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 命题研究 Dear Mike， I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 命题研究 Dear Mike， I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I can give you some suggestions. 命题研究 I often play outside with my classmates. I think it’s good for our body. I seldom use the electricity products, such as computers and mobile phones. And at school, doing eye exercises is really good for our eyes. I always do it carefully. What’s more, we can eat some healthy food to improve our eyes and body. And we can take a break when we have studied for too long. I hope these can help you. Yours， Li Hua 命题研究 【存在问题】 1．用词单调，句式单一，平淡无奇。 2．层次性弱。 命题研究 【范文升格】 Dear Mike， I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ①I’d like to share some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life with you. 命题研究 ②At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. ②In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phones or computers. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. ②Besides, doing eye exercises ③plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. ②Lastly, ④I usuall