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2021高考英语读后续写专题(七)
一:典题技法指导
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.
Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
写作思路
1. 确定主题:大主题是人与自然。故事主要内容是夫妻偶遇北极熊自救,最后感悟人与动物的关系,体谅动物的生存环境。hungry是关键词,可以思考什么原因导致饥饿?人类的活动是否是主要原因?人类应该做些什么?
2. 时空变化:没有大的时空转换,making dinner时,短时间内发生在营地篱笆附近的险情。危急时,正好直升飞机赶到。
3. 续写难点:情节比较简单,但想象的空间很大。一般的处理方法是侧重细节描写,心理活动与情感描写,平时需要积累一定量的能表现人物情绪与心理的具体动作词汇。
提纲
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.
1. He exposed his sharp teeth, snarling at us, as he ran forward.
2. And again the furious creature stood on his back legs and began to snap at the fence like a demon.
3. It seemed that his mouth was dripping with blood and his eyes were red with rage.
4. At the sight of it, I could feel a flicker of fear flooding over me, and Ellis was stunned, her mouth hanging open.
5. It wa