2019-2020学年北京高三英语学习专题 英语写作中去除冗余现象的策略 (共2份打包)

英语写作中去除冗余现象的策略 高三年级英语学科 1 2019北京高考 Last week, my class organized an activity with the theme “working is the most beautiful”. In one class meeting, our teacher informed us of this activity. Back home after school, I packed my briefcase with what I needed. Next day, my classmates and I helped the farmers pick the watermelons. Over dinner that evening, I shared what I had done with my parents. (63 words) 1 单词及短语层面的冗余 2 句子层面的冗余 3 篇章层面的冗余 CONTENTS 目 录 3 单词及短语层面的冗余 01 4 单词及短语层面的冗余 Picture 1: From the report, I learnt about the seriousness of the pollution situation. Picture 2: After the discussion, we made some preparation work for our campaign. （2020届海淀期末情景作文） 单词及短语层面的冗余 Picture 1: From the report, I learnt about the seriousness of the pollution situation. Picture 2: After the discussion, we made some preparation work for our campaign. 单词及短语层面的冗余(1) 汉语中的范畴词 如：问题、现象、情况、工作、方案等 Picture 1: From the report, I learnt about the seriousness of the pollution. Picture 2: After the discussion, we made some preparations for our campaign. 词汇及短语层面的冗余(2) （基于2020届海淀期中情景作文） Last week, our class organized a series of activities with the theme “national flag in my heart”, which left me a deep impression. On Monday afternoon, our teacher held a class meeting on the theme “national flag in my heart”. We were excited about it and couldn’t wait to get started. 词汇及短语层面的冗余(2) （基于2020届海淀期中情景作文） Last week, our class organized a series of activities with the theme “national flag in my heart”, which left me a deep impression. On Monday afternoon, our teacher held a class meeting on the theme “national flag in my heart”. We were excited about it and couldn’t wait to get started. 词汇及短语层面的冗余(2) 解决方案: 1. 用代词替换 2. 用其他同义表达替换 Last week, our class organized a series of activities with the theme “national flag in my heart”, which left me a deep impression. On Monday afternoon, our teacher held a class meeting on that topic. We were excited about it and